Any chance you'll be posting soon? I love the story!

Ooh i love this entire story! You're just so good with the emotions and character development as the plot happens, it's truly inspiring! The only problem is how long it has been since its been updated. I hope your muse comes back and you are able to finish this wonderful piece of work. If you need a cheerleader to help you, know that you have a fan in me!

ok confused... were is the spark child and are the decepticons still after her... if so please derect story that way. otherwise great story so far. update soon please!

Reading over this chapter again, I forget how epic the theme really is.

OMG I love how you put MyChem's lyrics into this chapter.

Luv it. I usually don't like fast coplex stories like this but this one is wonderful!

hell of a story to read

i didn't actually read this but this was the only way i can send you a message. you reviewed my story, To End All Wars, and thanks for the review. However, my advice to you is this: don't like, don't read.

Anon You are a complete idiot. Cartoons are not anime. Animu are CARTOONS. Sheesh. "What's wring with mpreg" LOL someone has a fetish. It's amazing how stupid people have become.

Anyways, anime does suck. On to the story itself, I think people have already said this already: It's awesome. I think you got the Sparkchild idea wired before everyone else ruined it.

Looks like Will and company have their work cut out for them.

And wow...poor 'Bee. I know what it's like to have stuff like that echo through your head. You do your best to silence it, and sometimes, you have to find some physical outlet to do so. It looks like he found his. Amazing stuff. Please, write more. :)

Another mind-blowing chapter. When Optimus had to release his charges, all I could think, "No, oh bad, bad, bad...it's a trap!" This was incredible. I noticed you changed Simmons' first name from Reginald to Seymour. I don't know if you did this originally for this chapter, or if it was an edit (since in earlier chapters as I read, he was Reginald). Either way, you've done an excellent job. I know the sting of writer's block, too. I hope you complete this, as well. :)

Of all the times for the All-Spark to be unco-operative. It may have good reasons, but it still would make the situation feel more hopeless.

And I could just imagine the fear paralyzing the humans. I wonder what made Optimus freeze up, though? I have a feeling you'll delve into that in a later chapter.

You've done a beautiful job; I don't know if you've even seen these reviews, and I hope, if this story isn't finished, you will continue until it is. You have great potential.

The camaraderie between Will and the others as he leaves their charges is a nice touch.

Thomas is a fool; he sent an image of two people to a dim-witted robot, not realizing that he didn't point out which one was Antonia. This, of course, will make for an excellent plot twist. :) Good job.

From the start of this chapter to its end, was absolutely incredible. The tension, the fear. And, as if there wasn't enough foreboding, you add that little excerpt from MacBeth. If any readers didn't know something climactic was about to happen, that little phrase probably did the trick.

I doubt anyone missed the obvious, however. ;)

You are gifted, beyond measure. Please, never give up on writing.

I got quite a laugh out of this chapter. "Giant robot leader of a giant robot faction." Lol, I could just hear Lennox say it the first time, and I could hear Optimus echoing it in a sarcastic manner. Priceless.