Love this!

wow, baby, that was really beautiful. Truly beautiful. I love it!

So i took your advice and read your story. lol This one looked really good, but out of curiosity, is the girl Alice or an original character?

so i have to ask, who is this mystery girl? not alice, the history doesn't match. one of your other characters, or just made up for this purpose?

this is so beautiful, and it genuinely sounds like jazz. he's ultimately my fave of all the vamps. alice is cool, but jazzy is the best! i really love this little story!

wow that story is beautiful i love it and i love jasper (that girl is me ok)

its amazing

oh and I LUVE JASPER FOREVER AND EVER

wow, this was amazingly constructed and really sweet :)

I loved it, and I think you should write some more stuff, I'd definetly read them :) x

I love Josh Groban, that song, and Jasper, so I absolutley loved it.

Yay for Jasper! :D

That was beautifully written!

I like how you never mentioned her name; it makes it so whoever reads it can make it whoever they want. Alice . . . and OC . . . themselves. . . :) I like that

Great job!