I know you said it's not dead but it's been 7 years

okay, if it wasn't for the yaoi bent of this fic? i would likely be enjoying it a fair bit. but as i am a straight male? the content makes me uncomfortable. i am extremely comfortable in my gender and orientation, and i have ZERO issues with two men being together. i just have no desire to read about it.

you have talent, but i feel you are stifling yourself by sticking to just slash pairings. try branching out more. i would recommend writing a few stories with straight or yuri pairings as an exercise. give yourself a challenge. or better yet? no pairings at all.

a romantic subplot can be an effective writing tool, but many authors here seem to forget, or never realize, that pairings are not actually needed for a decent fic. they can make for a fun diversion sure, but there is no ACTUAL need for them.

or another option, is have the relationship part happen off screen. acknowledge it, but make it an afterthought, not the focus.

this is merely my own opinion though. and as many will quote the golden rule of fanfics "Don't like, don't read" at me for this? i will acknowledge said rule and bow out at this point.

it's a decent enough fic, i do not dispute that. it's just not what i am into. so with that i take my leave.

so goodbye, and good luck with this and any future fics you may write.

thank you for your time.

Please update please

I can't believe that nine years passed since the last update. I really do wish that you would continue it.

I hope that all is well with your family first, and then we can have some updates. Love your story . Keep it up.

Is this story abandoned, I hope you will be able to continue it, the story is so wonderful and the crossover makes sense I don't see many Harry potter FF7 crossovers done this well so I really hoping that you haven't given up on this story. I am SO in for Vincent and Harry getting together xD, I also think there may be a possibility for Mpreg. 1, Harry is still a magical been. 2, during the experiments Hojo did something to Harry the would have enhanced the ability or created one. 3, You mentioned Omega being chaos counterpart his other half, we know Hojo had access to both Chaos and Omega, if not then Chaos could have turned Harry in the rush to save him from dying. So PLEASE consider this an option and i am dying to know what is going to happen next. It's so hard to find a good crossover ;A;. Overall this story is a amazing and i found myself 100% hooked to the story!

The changes in point of view is jarring and it is not always clear whose point of view it is. Adding a symbol or simply (space) or -line- to distingush the different povs would dramatically improve your clarity.

Sorry to rain on your parade here hun, but you really should place a sexual assault/rape/non-con warning at the beginning of this chapter. Because for people who have had something similar happen to them it can be triggering and cause significant harm.

The world that is the most messed up with the least resolution at tge end of it who might need the most help is probably the Full Metal Alchemist world. How Harry and Magic will make enough of a difference there? I don't know.
Then again the Bleach world is pretty messed up too.
Or if you wanna have a go at serious world building you can have a go at fixing the Tokyo Crazy Paradise world. The manga deals with the yakuza and police but implies some not so nice things about the state of the society at that point in time. Which you can build on.

i love it continue when you can no rush needed

Thank you for this Story.

As you stated that this Story is not abandoned i will Hope that you did not change your mind. I absolutly adore this story and pray for Its future

I imagine a tearful reunion between Harry and Zack.

Please Update! it’s been forever!

For the person who said that survivor’s guilt can destroy someone,I won’t say they’re wrong. But I don’t think Hermione and Remus told Harry that The spell would cost them their life. They only “mention to him that it would give him a second chance at living.”They never told him the all we know Harry thinks they’re still alive