Myobokuzan means Mt. Myoboku sot Mt. Myobokuzan is basically Mt. Mt. Myoboku

xDdd What a fucking shit full of inconsistencies, he tells her he hates her and then he goes to tsunade to offer sakura an apprentice. XDdd go hypocritical double standard, and still it's the author's fault for having a lousy narrative and 0 sense. Don't come back here, you're an asshole and you screwed up something with a potential piece of shit, I'm glad he's dead so I won't enjoy this abomination anymore.

Do you mind if I continue this story? On Wattpad?

PUN. CTU.A. TION. PLEASE!

i mean, its not a bad story; has a lot of potential. But, it desperately needs a rewrite, or a beta at the very least.

broooo. the grammar, man. grammar and sentence structure. half this story's length is unneeded "fluff".

hermit the dude is called a Toad Sage or Pervy Sage

Naruto hates Sakura so much , that he asked Tsunade to give her an apprentice.

Did you not proof read that? Makes zero sense.

Also why did Naruto take so please my to get the massive wound in his chest treated?

Tsunade or anyone else not telling Naruto about Sakura fragile mental state is fucking retarded.

Okay what the actual fuck? Were you drunk when you wrote this chapter? Literally 10 minutes ago he tells Sakura he is done with Team 7 and then he asks Tsunade to take Sakura as an apprentice. I was willing to give this story a chance despite the Sakura pairing but after reading the first chapter I have changed my mind. Peace out.

Honestly don’t see how you can add Sakura into Naruto’s harem in a way that makes sense after this chapter. Even if she changes (which I assume she will) Naruto has absolutely no reason to accept her and frankly if he does then he is pathetic. He even went as far to tell her that he hates her so for him to accept her would not only be pathetic but also breaking his nindo. I knew what I was getting into when I chose this story but still this story would be so much better if Naruto rejects her (even though I know he won’t).

Didn't he just say that he was done with team 7. Then why the fuck would he go back on his words just a few minutes later and ask Tsunade to take Sakura as her apprentice.
I don't even want to know what the author was drinking when he wrote this shit.

Oh my god the run on sentences. The grammar within this story is just...wow. PLEASE get a beta.

Why sakura just a god damn bitch I will never understand why authors have her as a choice ever

dumb, dumb, dumb.

so, naruto doesn't bother to get the gaping hole healed because why? He shows it off freely enough to the other rookies. But just decides to leave it alone while in the office with Tsunade. Right.

The ninja mercenary thing? Just fucking dumb, it makes no real sense as a title, as a job, or a plans by tsunade.

And last we have naruto asking tsunade to take on sakura as an apprentice, right the fuck after giving her the long deserved ass-chewing she deserves.

What crap.