Aw, this was pretty awesome. I don't see how that was bittersweet, I thought it was pretty..., cute.

I don't know why but I really liked this. :D I hope I can handle the bittersweet ending. I'm a sucker for happy endings.

awww...great ending. great story too.

somehow angstily sweet, love the concept :)

More please!_

Aw... that was adorable. I really liked the part where Abby refused to let Ziva use her - it's really fitting for her, I can't see her ever really letting anyone do that to her. And I'm glad they have a chance of going somewhere at the end of this - if you did write a third chapter, it'd be interesting to see how they get on together.

Anyway - superb, as always! The song fitted really well with the narrative, even though I've never heard it. ¡Asombrosa!

I really like your story. Just realized I hadn't written a review yet...

Anyway, nice two chapters, thank you for writing and posting.

Take care, Mel.

Continue please?

This is good

I think that you carrying on would be a good idea

This is a good storyline but it needs to be continued for people to truly understand how this panned out inside your head

I know from experiance that stopping half way through a story like this is bad for you as you will always be drawn back no matter how much work uou have to do

You have probably long stopped thinking about this by now but I think personally you should carry on

Just some friendly advice

Luv emziiee-x

I love it! It's not bog-standard Zabby angst- it's great. Really. I thought the way you showed Abby's thoughts all the way through the chapter worked really well, all your description was amazing; and the innuendo worked too - not too much, but enough to... well, suggest everything that needed suggesting, ¿sí? And the ending was bittersweet, as you said, but it was well written and poignant, and itsuited the fic as well as leaving it at a good point where you could either continue or just leave it.

Anyway - brilliant work, again! How you manage to write such fantastic fanfiction and do exams at the same time is beyond me (because I sure as heck can't!...). Well done!

Hey, girlie. You should have more confidence in your stories! It's YOUR story, don't worry about what other people think of the "ending". Don't apologize...

I enjoyed it. I love this pairing...in all genre's. There isn't enough stories about these two, so I'll take whatever I can get! ) Happy Thursday!