Please continue your story is amazing

Still have exams?

this is really good, I have no idea were you are taking this but it has a lot of potential :) I cant wait!

ich mag die geschichte und ich mag das pairig sehr, so eine art hintergrundwissen von der anderen seite und ich hoffe harry und fenrir werden sich irgendwie einig ohne das voldy dazwischen funkt. schreibst du weiter, bitte? lg hayne

This story is really interesting so far. I like how you has Harry lose control and attack Ginny, even though that sounds rude and heartless. I hate stories were Harry becomes a werewolf but everyone turns a blind eye and nothing happens but this one is the complete opposite and I love it. I can't wait for the next update!

Could you PLEASE finish the story?!

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Great story so far! I really love how original your concept is. Yes, the half-werewolf/lycanthropy poisoning idea is canon, but very, very rarely have I seen it explored in fanfiction. I also really love your Fenrir! You explain and almost...not justify, but give credence to his past actions whereas in canon and most fanfiction he's just a blood-thirsty monster merely because he is a werewolf, or a sadist, or a psychopath, etc. In all actuality, I've always believed Fenrir's character to be greatly misunderstood. With the way not only werewolves but other magical beings and creatures are treated by wizards and witches, its no wonder some of them act as they do. I believe also that a lot of it is propaganda and exaggerated tales created by the Ministry with the intention of striking fear into the hearts of the foolish, bigoted masses as well as to justify their cruelty and bias.

Anyway, as I'm sure you clearly noticed, I am applying for your team. Not to sound arrogant, but my speciality lies in adjusting and adding to "story lines, content and flow" in stories already written. I'd be more than happy to help you out in whatever capacity you require of me. I'm also quite punctual and as such will usually return the edited chapter to you within two to three hours.

Update? Please I'd like to know what happens in this story its very good

good chapter

Update soon, please.

(whimpers)
Where's Remus?
Is he okay?

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If you still need someone to bounce ideas around I am more than willing to help you out my email is christine_granger19 at

This is really good :) but its been such long time :/ wish you would continue but we have life to live Its understandable.
This is really good start

i liked...

meanie I was eating ice cream when I heard you hadn't updated in a while, I dropped my ice cream, Meanie!