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i loved it

i loved it

This was such a great story. The plot was wonderful and the romance between Fubuki and Edo was just so sweet. Even though they have two very different personalities, they still manage to fall in love. And Edo actually started having fun, which is something he needed. Great job as always. Looking forward to your next story. Until then, goodbye.

So Edo and Fubuki finally got around to doing the deed. I thought the ending was sweet. You really have a flair for writing romantic scenes-what with the picnic and then the moon watching. I guess next chapter is the last chapter, then. I'm so loving this story that I don't want it to end. Oh, well, keep up the amazing work and I can't wait for the next chapter.

I love the pairing of Fubuki and Edo. You wouldn't (or I wouldn't at least) think of them as a couple but you really make them work out. I bet Fubuki has something naughty planned for after Edo's duel. *giggles* Can't wait for the next chapter.

So sweet. :) I've never seen a Fubuki/Edo pairing before. The rainbow symbolizing Fubuki and the dark storm clouds symbolizing Edo was also quite inventive. I'm a sucker for things like that.

Aww, Edo's definitely very good at "not" doing things, isn't he? I do so love his train of thought, it's very amusing to follow.

(Also, can I propose 'Anything you can do' as a soundtrack?)