Not trying to be a dick but I hope to infinity and beyond that you actually edited your original novel. Like seriously.

You need some help with contractions and possessives. “Your right, Harry.” WRONG! Since rewording it to “You are right, Harry,” makes sense and is what you are trying to convey, then you need the contraction “you’re”. Come on...that is GRADE SCHOOL LEVEL MATERIAL! Do a spell and grammar check before posting...it will catch 95% of your (note the your I just used here is possessive so no apostrophe or e needed) mistakes. We are human (to err is human) but we also have eyes and tools. Please use them. ALWAYS.

Sytraviuos Grindelwald’s name

Harry has no right to be mad at Ginny. He dumped her over a year prior and made no effort to get back with her. It was right of her to move on.

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Nice FF so far but the Part with Eurofighters is a little over the top. That they can't lock on should be alright. Same goes for their Mauser BK-27 Maschine Cannons.

But their maximum Altitude is at about 19000 Meters with about 300 Meters per Second climb rate and maximum speed of more than 2400 Kilometers per hour.
And no Fighter Pilot would fly close enaugh to an unmatchable enemy to get rammed.

So it would have been better to make the jets be unsufficient to shoot the dragon down while they can't be touched either.

Doesn't always has to be over-dramatic. Would also have shown that muggles can be a danger to the wizarding World. And in no folklore or similar a dragon has the flying capability to deal with a Jet that is equipped with an afterburner. Eurofighter doesn't even need afterburner to fly supersonic.

By: near; to and beyond the vicinity of
Bye: goodbye
Through: past; beyond
Threw: past tense of throw
Their: possessive
There: in or at that place
They’re: they are
To: expressing aim/purpose. Direction
Two: number
Too: in addition; also
Allot: divide; portion
A lot: many

I've always wondered why Harry didn't just snap the Elder Wand and burn the ashes. Seriously, it's more trouble than it's worth.

Words Cannot describe the feeling in my gut reading the chapter. So happy that Grindalwald 2 has his own story. Now to see own much fore a Kindle Fire.

The characters seem too OOC for me, Ron sounds like a literal propped up windbag and Hermione sounds/acts nothing like canon :(

I F***** hate Ron, why couldn't J.K. Rowling just make him die off and pair Hermione with Harry?
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A brilliant and most enjoyable story. I think you could go a long way with Xavier, he and Raven coul go a long way. Thanks for writing,