so wonderful...

Atobe struggles to fill in that increasing gap...watch in sneak peaks how he manages to fill it. Atofemryo

Well, that was super cute. I find it sad that they didn't actually 'get' together until the age of thirty, but that's okay. As long as they are together, it's all good. haha

Great one-shot!

I didn't find it confusing at all XD

It was very sweet, kinda sad at some points, the end was adorable, and the first kiss was pretty funny XD "Ore-sama was curious" XDD

Well overall, I loved it, totally awesome X3

The story was confusing, but as you said it was made on purpose, so i'll accept that. And the fact that it made the flow of the story better, by going to the past, present then future. However i still think that it would have seemed better if it were put in time sequence. And, eventhough you didn't go much into detail, the input of how their love grew for each other over the years is very appealing. And i just have to ask, why is it that in many of them there is a 'breeze'? Does it have somekind of meaning to all the story, or is it just a coincidence? All in all, it was a cute story.

-Kuroi-

Sweet one shot !

Thank you for sharing

aw nice one-shot, a bit confusing but sweet none the less