Type your review here.i say a useless fic a idiot naruto namikaze useless fic

Well your whole theory about danzo helping the uchiha revolt so that he could become hokage to but it as nicely as possible it is stupid. The uchiha when they led the revolt would have put one of their own as hokage no matter how much danzo helped and also danzo always wanted what he thought was best for konohoa and as crazy as he was a civil war in the middle of said city streets even if he managed to come out on top would never be for the good of konohoa at minimum many of the people and shinobi that allow the village to function would die at worst this would essentially signal the vultures flying overhead ei the other shinobi villages that konohoa is ripe for 5he taking leading to a war where the city has lost a rather drastic number of it warriors citizens and infrastructure making it easy prey for any other village which even if konohoa did win would drastically decrease it so much that it would be a shadow of what it was. Danzo wishes to see it become an empire so that no one could ever threaten it him siding with the uchiha even if they did win and make him hokage would lead to the exact opposite of such

Dude I like your story but you got one other names of a Akatsuki member wrong kakuzo. Should be Kakuzu

good story I hope you continue a greeting, see you!

Cómo irrita todo el capítulo... Si el protagonista sigue con lo de Teme, haciéndose el culpable cada vez que habla del tema de Hokage, que a mi en lo personal me dan ganas de estrangularlo de la irritación, actuando como un idiota.. Ejemplo de esto vestirse de un puto zorro disfraz, cuando se supone que debe ir encubierto... Claro, como si nadie te reconocería... Pedazo de basura humana...
Todo esto va al autor, gracias a sus "grandes" dotes de escritura... Tos* Basura cliché...Tos*

man, even in canon, Iwa was pathetic

I think this is really great! I just want to point out a spelling error. When you explain how Kakashi and Sakura were killed by Gaara, Temari and Kankuro, you call them the Kazikage's children. The correct spelling is Kazekage. I feel really snooty pointing this out because I think your story is really well written and structured, but it was just something that I noticed. I love this and can't wait to continue reading.

I knew they weren't dead

theyre not gunna be killed off that easily

yep kakashi def believes what doesn't kill you makes you stronger XD

poor Naruto but I'm still loving the naruhina moments here if they are bittersweet

he had better hope is good at breaking genjutsu if he ends up earning kurenai's ire like he did asuma's

danzo u should know u cant out fox a fox

poor Naruto T_T

poor Naruto no matter what world he still has problems with the inuzukas