Not sure I would want to continue reading if this becomes some kind of trial from the goddess and fighting her enemies for her crap. I hate stories where the author throws tragedies at the MC saying it builds character when all it does is torture their MC and shows the author is sick.

when took out the 2 men out Naruto had them swords now my now and too was a jacket and hat ,when the 2 had a eye path on him and when Naruto took off him and then he cutting into him like Naruto doing it to the other one and his shots now ,when put them on now and then money he had took too, when put them into the waves bund now , when then the army now was the same way now , when whip them now with thunder and fire now, and shadows hits now , even the mob boss too, when Naruto had the money now, he had think of keeping it hand no now , put the money away now,

I'm not a Sakura fan, but in all honesty, anyone who can't take 'NO' for an answer after several times has issues. Naruto is a creepy stalker here.
Of course, so's Sakura. :)

I have to admit, I definitely prefer your revised chapters over the original chapters. Please keep it up!

I agree with the guest comment Sakura is generally disliked by most and also elements are represented by a person's personality thus Earth would be her only element. Second, even with all those affinities, it would not do her any good as she could never master more than two in her lifetime that and her personality is not suited for it. I will just drop her though but it was interesting till you had Naruto handing out Jutsu to them especially Sakura after what she said to him and it is somehow washed away like nothing. Call it bias but I am not a fan of sakura

It is a very good story, I hope you continue soon, a greeting, bye!

Dam she has a mate.

Outfit sounds like crap. Like seriously stupid sounding. No taste whatsoever.

I'm dead man imagine a death by underwear at the funeral ಥ‿ಥ

I like this so far, I don't think that Naruto seems to overpowered I mean if he were overpowered he'd be like one of the Akatsuki members, Zetsu, or especially like Madara I mean THAT was overpowered. I can't wait to see how you make Saskue good in your fic.

Update bitch

You made a good effort. I like your writing but the plot is not good.

Well, I lost interest the moment you put three one piece techniques on it. Sorry, but I guess I'll pass on this one.

It means that Naruto just used his first passive Talk no Jutsu.

All them techniques tho, also, My turtle is named Lotis to give recognition to Po's real name!