I'm sorry I meant to say if one of them died my heart would break. But I love the story so much bye bye. Sorry again.

That was AMAZING! I love this story I'm saving it. My favorite part in this chapter was the whole thing of Megatron and Starscream making love. But starting for when Megatron and Starscream interned Megatron's quarter. I love this story you are a amazing person you do what you love.

But I fell in love with this story when my older sister told my I should reed it and she was right. If one of them died my heart would but I the story cookbook much bye bye.

OK I really really love this chapter my favorite again the whole part when Megatron touched Starscream's wings. I also liked when Thundercracker told Starscream that Megatron has some kind of feelings for Starscream. But Megatron and Starscream still haven't kissed yet they better kiss in the last chapter or I swear I will be mad. But love the chapter awesome work. ;)

That was a awesome chapter my favorite part is was Thundercracker ad Skyworp were touching Starscream's wing. Starscream thought "he couldn't help but feel Megatron's touch when the seekers were touching winging" and Starscream arched his back. My favorite part right there love this story so far very very very satisfied awesome work. ;)

Awesome chapter I love this story so far my favorite part was when Megatron was talking about how starscream was going to give in and let Megatron hear him moan. That was my favorite part keep up the awesome work ;)

OK this is getting really really awesome my favorite quote is "his wish to kiss the seeker but also his long desire to lure Starscream to his berth".And my favorite part is any memories of Megatron touching Starscream's wings. Awesome chapter great work. ;)

I love this chapter my favorite part was when Megatron started to touch Starscream's wings. And my favorite line was Megatron realizing that he desired to kiss Starscream I love it. Love the story so far great work.

Awww Megatron cares about Starscream and when does Megatron and Starscream kiss I love the way people go into detail of how they're kissing. Good chapter keep up the great work.

My favorite part of this chapter was this "Megatron kept finding himself staring at Starscream's fine silver paint job and graceful movements". When I was reading that part I pictures Starscream all shining and doing leg kicks. But love the story so far keep up the good work

This chapter was long but great I prefer shooter chapters but this one was good.
Megatron and Starscream is my second favorite OTP. Keep up the good work .

YEEEEEESSSSS! Perfect perfect perfect! I loved it! God I'm gonna read this again and again and Again! And NEVER get bored with it!

LOVEF IT LOVED IT LOVED IT!

This story was one for making you hold your breath. The theme was good, the plot was good and the writing was, at the most part, good. I had expected a terrific ending from the beautiful and well thought out chapters from before but I was left unimpressed.
You rushed the interface part with seeming worry or discomfort for writing it. It was good but rather confusing and weakly detailed. Word of advise: try not to write something that makes you uncomfortable if my assumption is correct.
Have a good day and thank you for the interesting story!

I liked this scene.

I've read this story twice now, and I have to admit, it's one of my favorites in the fandom. Your writing is engaging and the plot is superb. My favorite part of it all is the Seeker ritual, showing the strength of Starscream's trine through their bond. It adds a unique flavor to the story as well. Kudos!

Was a very good read so far :3