| Reviews for Valediction |
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  Guest chapter 1 . 6/12/2018 I don't care for Tayu. besides she's evil! I like it when it was Naruto and Ino. |
 Typhlosion8 chapter 9 . 3/19/2017 Although NaruTayu isn't my favourite ship, and Evil!Tsunade is something I rarely see or even read, this story brought everything together nicely. My only wish is that it was a bit longer and went deeper into how Naruto changed, how Konoha took over the world, and the difficulties that came with it. But a great story anyways, it's message was strong. :-D |
| Ab chapter 1 . 2/13/2017 Is it bad tha I LITERALLY got a NOSEBLEED reading this |
| knisfejwfionrgr chapter 9 . 1/2/2016 So good! I wish I found this earlier. |
| AthenaSmile chapter 1 . 11/4/2015 Well-written, but the plot just seemed too impossible to happen. The characters aren't even the names you write them to be anymore. More like, total AU and simply using the names in Narutoverse. Dropped it midway chapter 2. Still, well-written. |
| rinbebop chapter 9 . 9/14/2015 wow! amazing story with a nice ending. Kept me captivated the whole time. I had to dig deep to find stories like this among the tens of thousands of other worthless fics..lol! |
| Guest chapter 1 . 8/13/2014 AWESOME! |
| creativesm75 chapter 9 . 8/3/2014 cool whoa. this is the second time I HAVE read a evil tsunade story |
| reshiramsandzekroms chapter 1 . 11/21/2013 awesome |
| VioletSaber chapter 9 . 9/2/2013 This was an amazing short story! This story should definitely have way more reviews and favs because of the fact that it's one of the best completed NaruTayu (too many NaruTayu fanfics are incomplete or ongoing) fanfics. NaruTayu is by far my favorite pairing, however and including your story, there really is about 4-5 completed, non-harem and just straight up NaruTayu fanfics out there. However, your AU is really the best one out of the NaruTayu fics out there and the only real complaint I have is that you could have given Tayuya some backstory. Once again, thank you for a wonderful NaruTayu fanfic! |
| asss chapter 9 . 6/21/2013 another nosense garbage |
| Arvarno chapter 9 . 10/10/2012 Very well written. The only problem I have is with how things went with Gaara. Naruto being willing to attack him seems like a huge stretch, and Gaara's death is just odd. Here he seems to be even more powerful than in canon, and managed to subdue a 6 tail Naruto. It's odd that Tsunade could possibly manage to overpower him. She's strong, but not that much. Naruto's lack of reaction to his death is also very odd, unless you mean to imply that Gaara sacrificed himself to give Naruto somebody to blame. But still I'd expect quite a lot of emotion anyway. |
| jtcr chapter 9 . 10/19/2011 hell yeah that is how it goes |
| jtcr chapter 8 . 10/19/2011 well naruto kicked her ass in the end but way to go GAARA |
| jtcr chapter 7 . 10/19/2011 well naruto is thinking shit and now he has to |
