Please continue this story. It is so good! I want to know what happens to midna and link.

There were a few grammar errors in this chapter and the heartbreak as well!

I'm enjoying this story a lot. I know I don't review every chapter, but it's caught my interest to much to stop!

I didn't see that coming!

Nobody would guess this, but if I had to guess who the ghost is in the next chapter; It would definitly be Queen Rutelia AKA Prince Ralis' Mother.

Don't abandon the story!

Wow, this story is just amazing I can't wait for the next, I read you lack of some ideas (I bet this has been hard to keep it this amazing) I am not sure if this will help you out, I will think more about ideas as well, but for now this just crossed my mind:
-Midna have limited time and they just must risk it through the dessert, (maybe including the help of the last twili somehow)
-Midna could die while giving birth but by help of Zelda (not killing her) could be back.
-Maybe the Bulblin might do something.

I am not sure for now I only though of this, my fav parts are only where Midna are injured, maybe a bit cruel but I like to see Link does care about her 3.
Again really Can't wait for the next!

Good fanfic, Miss w This a original work. I can't wait for the next chapters. But! One thing! (look the review bottom her review) Well, yes, I'm a impatient person, but I hate that kind of behaviour. I mean you have a personal reason for taking your time to write yours chapters. In my fanfic-webside (yes, I'm french and I think you see that, sorry for my bad English '), there is a "fanfictioner" and she take her time too, just like you. I don't care to the lack to chapter, I just love the surprise and the joy I have in see a new chapter after a long time. So, take your time if you want, I would wait "wink" . So... hee hee! See you soon! (I hope you understand my bad English ')

What is taking so long here? Have you not read any of our comments? If you need help then read our comments for ideas that might actually help. Stop slacking and update already. GEEZ!

It has been almost two months since you updated. What is the hold up? Please update soon because I am tired of being kept in suspense like this. Seriously this is taking too long, update soon please! And please let Midna rerun to her true form.

I don't mean to rush you or to sound rude but it has been way over a month since you updated. I know you have the next chapter thought up and what you should do is focus on one chapter at a time. Please update soon and please let Midna return to her true form.

This was and still is the best MidLink fic on the site. Please do not abandon it again after finally deciding to revive it!

The ghost from Link's past in the next chapter is undoubtedly the Hero's Spirit/Hero's Shade who taught him the seven hidden skills.

I think you should include the four light spirits in Hyrule to stop the assault on the Twili. I also think that Zelda should strip Wisler of his title command and all privileges and Fire him and also discharge captain Stooker of his rank and authority. She is the princess of the kingdom after all and she do everything to stop this. I am also hoping sincerely that you return Midna to her true form.

Pease let Midna return to her true form.

well dammmmmm