Pls make ch 9 I am just getting so impatient to read it

Pls write ch 9 as fast as possible

This was a fantastic fic I love this

I think you should do sequel of this I know this is late and you most likely won't do one.

Love you yaar
This is the best fiction l have read so far.
Keep writing more fiction on ash and misty (pokeshipping) and on more new ideas.

Me loves it

you spelled hoenn wrong

Are you sure you have a beta reader? This needs a LOT of editing. But I really like your plot.

Lucas Contest trainer Eevee Flygon Gardevoir PLEASE

I would like my name to be Annabelle, and I would like to be a Pokemon Trainer. My recommended Pokemon would be the Eeveelutions. Thank you! I would have nicknames for my Pokemon to.

you dont even know where to put the symbols!your sentences make no sense. does this:"Look you two I want to help them so please let me do this?" She asked the two good or:"Look you two I want to help them so please let me do this!" She asked the two boys.? "Please May get up you can't die not yet please I love you!" you have to put exclimation mark after"please may get up! you cant die! not yet! i love you!" try and make your stories more can do it.

Great story and nice add in to allow fans of the story to be added in although personally the story probably would of been better with only the characters from the series but as I said it was a nice change to include the fans of this story.

Absolutely loved it!
I was hooked :)

thnk you so much for writing this!
i love it soo much

Aww yea! Dragonball Z Pokémon Instant Win.

I even recognised the reference to Trunks vs Cell with the whole muscle mass-speed thing.