Reviews for Exorcizamus
MarbleWolf chapter 1 . 3/9/2019
could I adopt this perhaps?
Sailor Dragonball 87 chapter 6 . 12/26/2017
This is awesome! Please continue! What happens when they get to Grimmuald Place? Since they're wizards, where are they going to go to school to letally be able to use magic? Hogwarts, because they're already in England, or a wizarding school in America?
Sailor Dragonball 87 chapter 1 . 12/24/2017
Alight, but you misspelled McGonagall's name.
sorceritza chapter 6 . 9/28/2017
"... I'm purposefully stopping it here. cause I have a great urge to write when they meet the Order, and if I stop now, ill want to come back and write it soon. Meaning sooner updates."

clearly...
Guest chapter 6 . 12/6/2016
UPDATE PLEEEEEEASE ITS BEEN 7 YEARS
I HAVE WAITED 7 YEARS
UPDAAAAAAAAATE
Azazeles chapter 6 . 7/31/2016
This story is funny and entertaining.
It is great :D Good work! :)
Harley2003 chapter 5 . 7/20/2016
I love this story
Kaleesh chapter 4 . 9/3/2015
As much as I want to like this story- being the Dean-with-post-Hell-issues whore that I am- all of the Harry Potter characters are terribly OOC. Considering the age of this story, I might not have commented, but given the lack whatsoever of constructive criticism you requested in the reviews, I thought it might be a good idea...

McGonagall demanding that a Muggle show her respect for being a witch? That's something to expect from Malfoy- you know, a racist- not a member of the Order of the Phoenix.

And Dumbledore, legitimately frightened by Muggle brute force? Not to be harsh, but have we read the same books? You really must put more effort into your writing. I doubt that you really feel that these characterizations are realistic. Everyone feels the urge to make characters from your more favored series one-up those from the other, but you have to learn how to tamp that temptation down if you want to be a good writer.

Lastly- copying the demon blood issue from Sam onto Dean is really quite predictable and unoriginal, not to mention the fact that it chips away at the integrity of the source material. Certain characters are special for certain reasons. Much as I am not a big fan of Sam's, duplicating what makes him unique not only damages his character but takes away from what makes Supernatural what it is, its main dynamic being the contrast between the brothers, what with Sam being Lucifer's demon-tainted vessel and Dean being Michael's puristic one. It doesn't make much sense either, considering what Sam has experienced as a direct result of his tainted blood even without Ruby. Why would Dean be spared this?

Now, to offer suggestions on what you might do differently.

What I'd expected as I read that portion was for an explanation as to why Dean was not chosen by Azazel despite the fact that he was Mary's firstborn son. This hasn't been explained much in canon, and it would have been very cool for the blood injection to go wrong, to Azazel's chagrin, due to 'something' already being there. This would not only explain why Dean had a strange reaction to magic, but why Azazel moved on to Sam, for a cool tie-in with canon, something that always strengthens crossovers. You would be offering something that even Supernatural's writers never have. It might also explain why Dean could see faeries when Sam could not, something we've never been told either.

As for your grammar, which needs work, I would suggest reading Strunk & White's "The Elements of Style." Just copypasting that into google will find you a full PDF.

The only thing that can help your characterizations would be to re-read the books and pay close attention Minerva and Dumbledore's sections.
Shanza chapter 6 . 1/2/2015
I do like this! Know it's been a while, but it'd be hilarious to see what happens when they do meet the order!
HappiestClam chapter 6 . 6/16/2014
Okay, I'm just gonna get right to the point here. This story is amazing! But there are only six chapters. And why does this amazing story have only six chapters? Hmmm, December 2009 was such a long time ago, and yet...only six chapters Lady-Beau. I am sure that I am not alone in saying that I would be overjoyed if this story was updated again. But, thank you for the fabulous six chapters you have provided us readers with, they have been greatly appreciated.

But seriously, overjoyed :D
Umemah chapter 6 . 5/8/2014
please update the story is so good
Guest chapter 6 . 12/20/2013
Please update!
I love your story
Fi Suki Saki chapter 6 . 9/9/2013
I actually still donot understand how Dean can feel the magic 'energy'... If Sam, more or less...

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I kinda hope this fic to continue...
Dark-Supernatural-Angel chapter 6 . 8/20/2013
The Winchesters are actually growing...yikes!

Anymore updates?
Dark-Supernatural-Angel chapter 3 . 8/20/2013
*gasp* Azazel got to Dean too. I wasn't expecting that yet it could explain Dean's immunity to the obliviate spell.

Nicely done
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