Wow what a story! It was awesome and I enjoyed reading it. Everything was realistic enough to make it believable (with their personalities and situations) and it just grabbed you and made you want to finish it to know what happens! Seeing Sasuke struggle with his pregnancy seemed like him, unbelieving and a bit pissed, but he kept his goals in mind and accomplished everything he wanted and more. Honestly as my own guilty little pleasure I am glad they had more kids, Naruto just has so much love to give; especially his reaction to losing one of the babies shows just how deeply he loves his kids. Naruto would make a great parent and with his help so would Sasuke. Thank you for this story! Now off to read the sequel!

I really love this story！Actually,I read it several years ago,and didn't notice that there was a sequel until yesterday.I'm so excited, and I'm gonna read the latter story right away!

Omg this story was amazing, I truly loved it, now I'm going for the sequel!

This definitely had potential to be a full length story and I would've loved if you had done it that way because the pacing always felt real awkward to me everytime I read, "three weeks later."

As far as characterizations go, Naruto and Sasuke were definitely OOC. I didn't mind it but Naruto was really annoying with all his nagging and depressing thoughts. Sasuke was even more of a dick, he'd get all aggresive and defensive about anything and everything Naruto did towards to him. In the summary it claimed to be NaruSasu but during (at least) 6 chapters, it felt like Sasuke was the more dominant one.

ANYWAY, onto the better part of the review! :D

I guess I liked the plot, Madara is such a badass in the series that I have no complaints of him in this, he's just so manipulative that it brings different paths to a story.

I absolutely HATE Danzo in the series and I'm glad you made (a pregnant) Sasuke defeat him, in a way.

I just adored the short Itachi & Sasuke brotherly love scene, so heart-warming. Sasuke really needed that after all that Danzo had said/done to himself and his family. Awesome scene for character development.

Who was Itachi special person? Was it me? Oh gawd.

I don't think I've read much mpreg stories; containing Sasuke none the less, but I really enjoyed it. I think I might be on a NaruSasu mpreg binge read tonight! Hehe O:D

Thank you for this awesome story!

Hi!
I really like your fanfic! It's pretty awesome! And also the sequel of it (the tricks of destiny) is also gorgeous! XD So...
I'm willing to translate your work into Vietnamese! 333 I make sure that I can give you the direct link to the translation and keep the author's name, link to the ordinary work, and a picture of my permission that has been accepted. (and MAYBE I'll translate the sequel too after that. But it's too angst so i can't decide... TvT )
Hope you'll have a good day *heart*
Please reply!

im seriously about to cry right now TT_TT
i saw that you started saying 'un'
so here's for you TT_\) [yes verry uncharacteristic but i feel so sad]
i dont understand #2 please explain it with the surrounding text for me

he gonna be pissed XD

I like how everything has turned out :)

This was beautiful
I think I almost cried like twice since I get really into these things
But jesus
Thank you
This was wonderful to read, especially since the characters were reasonably in character
Gosh
Amazing.
'Nuff said.

I like Naruto

hallo，dear sandy

I very like this fanF. would you allow me to translate it into chinese?

Ariel

Great story. I had a craving for reading a NaruSasu, so Im glad I found this story. It was beautiful and I am glad Sasuke changed for the better.

Awww,,, the ending was so preciousXD

I like this:)

I loved this chapter,,,, and the end with the candles was just like...YO! k I'm done now:)

Ahhh,,, I like, I like. It seems you've finished so no point in saying you should continue. But I seriously like Sasuke and you make me like Sakura even though I'm still mad at her.