Absolutely stunning. Wow. I love it to death.

One of the most realistic Sakura joins the Acatuki fics I have ever read if not the most. Also very dark. Loved it though.

This was really good! A few errors in spelling but still good!

Your one shots blow my mind.

I love ... I love this awesome

This was unbelievably good.

As I said before, you are an awesome writer! Have you ever considered writing a book, or a novel? I bey you could be a recognized author :3 if you ever do, if you ever consider it, PLEASE inform me. I would LOVE to keep being your reader :3

Incredible job. You created an entire world and almost gave nothing away. Truly, an amazing masterpiece.

...wow that was really deep but overall a really good story.

I think this is the most beautiful story I've read in ages. I don't know how to describe how I feel because I am simply shaken from the... the way you wrote this. I felt as though it was ME in that story, that those things happened to my mind and body. Her pain and sadness and... Oh, I really don't know how to say it. It's beautiful and I had to make a review. I haven't done that in ages, but this... I had to even though I don't really know what to write.

I really love the way you wrote it, the way their emotions shine through, the dark feeling you get by reading this. I really think you should become an author. I would definitely buy and read all of your books, especially if they will be written like this.

It's beautiful. Keep up the good writing.

Kyasurin.

Hm..I've only read like, a single chapter of Black Lagoon, but for some reason, this just screams "BLACK LAGOON!" or some mafia manga... not that you're stealing anything but it seems to be dark like that..

It was a little confusing with the current and then it backtracks to the beginning.. I had no warning , no line like - to tell me... maybe put an extra ENTER to separate the paragraphs? Other than that it was just fine.. very well written in the grungy, dirty, underground soldier mercenary, yadda yadda way.. i could see the dirt , the raw emotion ..grimy..just earthy and filthy..and dirty emotions..I could FEEL it... you know what I mean right?

Loved the dark edges to this, but I admit the constant/sudden shifting of POVs and scenes confused me. ;

that was totally and insanely amazing! i LOVED it!

A mixture of dark and romance. A different type of AU, a different type of evil. Very nice, I love it. Gangster is so attractive.

love thisssssssssssss!