I don't know how you do it, but you are a master manipulator of words, no doubt in my mind. Now if you'll excuse me, I must keep reading...

Most beautiful fanfic I've ever written. Not only have you captured both characters well, the language and description are uncomparable as well.

I also like the small sections, they are so much easier to read than long, tedious chapters.

Sweet romance mixed with a slight hint of humour.

Keep up the good work~ I'm waiting for Gin's section with anticipation~

Aw, I would love it if you owned Bleach! Well, okay, there are some fairly obscure (Read: extremely) pairings that I would be crushed if I couldn't love them because something else was cannon, but this one is too heartbreaking not to love. I know that I wouldn't have been able to think a plot like Bleach up by myself, and it amazes me at times how manga artists do it.

Anyways, onto my cooing and praising how well done I think this is! I, and granted I wasn't looking too hard, didn't see any mistakes, which is most certainly a plus. That coupled with the way the words flowed and the characterization was wonderful. It's always nice to find writers that can create scenes with such imagery that you feel you're standing in the same room as them, watching their interactions.

Wonderfully done and write more soon! :)

Very nice!

As much as I love the sad side of the Gin/Izuru-pairing, the small, happy alsmost fluffy side of the pairing is always nice for a change. And you managed to portray this side so amazingly well. You didn't overdo it and put in just the right amount of affection in their relationship.

Every one of these snippets made me actually smile. A rare deed for a ff.

You should write about these two more often!

I'm not a Gin fan but I do like Kira and I thought you did a great job on this drabble. I'm looking forward to your Byukuya/Renji story though- those are two of my favorite characters in Bleach after Rukia and Ichigo.

Keep up the awesome work!

Very sweet and tame... but you managed to actually draw each one just perfect... I just love Gin Ichimaru and Kira...

I hope you can managed to turn another awesome story between those two... How about how you think those two meet? I sure like to read about the first time Gin lay eyes on Kira or Kira got a glimpse of that devilicious-creature Gin Ichimaru...

Lovely. It was just so lovely. The level of intimacy you made for them was breath taking. It always nice to see Gin and Izuru be close but the tone you gave it rang with a level of trust the was delightful to see. Also their understanding of the intricacy of their bond was a pleasure to see to. (Giggles: Cold tea Ya Know I didn't mean it.)