So CUTE!

Excuse me while I die laughing at Fakir's inner voice. It is just so jarring when compared to his normal personality. Even when Fakir's being nice he's so restrained and the thought of him having such a hyperactive inner self... Dying. Just dying. Also...that has to be one of my favorite confessions ever. The only romantic bit was the kissing and Fakir's actions immediately before he finally ADMITS IT. Everything else was just so painfully awkward which made the whole thing just PERFECT. And that ending...Fakir gets payback for the medicine from hell. Back to dying. Yeah, I liked this. I liked this a lot.

I was laughing through the whole chapter! My family now thinks I'm insane but it was so funny! And cute! And sweet! And written really well!

Cute!

I LOVE THIS STORY! Its soooo sweet!

That was so unbelievably cute! I'm still squeeing. Yay for ahiruXfakir fluff.

God this was hilarious! Sometimes I just like to read a short and funny PT fanfiction. Well done BluSakura! *claps* .

This was so freaking cute *w*

Phineas and Ferb reference!

"Oh, and you're the universe's bitch" XD my favorite line! I literally loled.

so cute

"Oh my God, she's ON TOP OF YOU!"

…Was his inner voice panicking or cheerin
XD fav line XD

Aww I love it! Both Fakir and Ahiru were in-character the entire time, which made it very fun to read. I could actually hear the characters' as I read the dialogue.

Heheheheheheh as was laugh/coughing uncontrollably because -ironically- I had a cold at the time of reading this!

SOO MUUUCCHH YEESS