Reviews for A Valentine Carol
Jisbon28 chapter 6 . 5/26
It was painful, sweet, romantic and cathartic. It was everything! I don't know how you do it to convey so many emotions in a six-chapter story. But I loved it, thanks so much for writing it.
Jisbon28 chapter 5 . 5/26
That was truly heart-breaking, but I guess he also needed to feel that pain to come to his senses.
Jisbon28 chapter 4 . 5/26
A cool way to show him what he's giving up on, it's normal I guess for him to pretend instead of act on his feelings due to what you wrote about his parents leaving him behind. But he should have realized sooner that he didn't exactly treat Riza according to his real feelings because he was too focused on his goals.
Jisbon28 chapter 3 . 5/25
This hurt, but I guess it's important that Roy sees what he's done.
Jisbon28 chapter 2 . 5/25
Haha, this looks interesting. I'm intrigued.
Jisbon28 chapter 1 . 5/25
Raven's last line cracked me up!
And damn Roy, I hope Havoc punches him for making Riza suffer.
Tropicallight chapter 6 . 8/19/2019
Lol that was good!
sunandsea9 chapter 6 . 9/16/2014
I loved it! :D
huinsutt99 chapter 1 . 11/25/2012
I have a feeling I'm really going to enjoy reading this particular story.
ferbfletcherlover chapter 6 . 6/12/2012
awww... so sweet :3 love it :D
svvanmillsarchive chapter 4 . 1/15/2012
This chapter made me squeal a lot. XD
royai fan chapter 6 . 1/8/2012
AAAAAHHH this made me feel all fuzzy inside. thx so much for one of the best royai stories ive ever read! :) it was so cute and very very well written. had everything i was looking for in a royai fanfic! :D
Anana553 chapter 6 . 4/25/2011
aww epic ending

loved it!

the scrooge idea was awesome xD
Anana553 chapter 5 . 4/25/2011
uu creepy
Anana553 chapter 4 . 4/25/2011
awww cuteee

i loved the pajamas party at riza's xD

i loved the way you made her mum!

finally, roy gets a grip
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