Also,. seriously? Gypsy territory? Thats not a thing, the world. of Naruto has actual countries...

On hindsight, you wrote this story really stupidly. The whole premise is everything gets in the way of Sakura telling him she's pregnant. It comes off really convenient and boring because of that.

That's not how that works idiot mito had kids and she was fine same as kushina and the only way that would affect naruto is if he was female you do your research better next time

FUCK. That was good. Like REALLY good.

Maybe even great.

Such a beautiful story worth reading.. I LOVE IT! One of the best narusaku fic

Very nice fic! I love Toru already :)

my god! this is something. the first time a fanfiction made me cry. this is simply too good man. i am jealous as well as eager to finish this.

This is really good and warmed my heart. This is one of the best narusaku story. Main thing, you keep characters in character and don't make Sakura a bitch when she punched Naruto. You described their relationship in very lighthearted way and I really love it. Keep it up

This story was one hell of a ride tbh! Big ups to the author to take the time in completely , you don't know but you're great! At last , I found a fic worth reading and which was completed too. Keep up the good work!

I love this story so far, the characters are like they should have been. Better story than the original...and to those negative comments, you guys suck! It takes time and creativity to come up with this stories, so don't be rude and appreciate the work. So what if it's kinda different, you have to be open minded about this stories.

Seriously, after all the talk about Naruto being strong, he sure gets thrown around easily..., plus there is almost no jutsu used at all aside from henge. So Fights arent really your forte although the story itself is enjoyable, and characters themselves are well written (Although Naruto is kinda annoying with all the caps shouting), but the fights, well could be better and I hate when people say Naruto is the strongest of Konoha or of all the five nations, but then he gets beat up and played so easily.

Wh-wh-what the fuck is this shit ?

Looks like you're bashing Sakura

I just have to say that this story has been AMAZING! I love the story line, action scenes. But most of all, I love how you write the NaruSaku relationship and Team7. You really captured their personalities right, good job! And also, you write lemons pretty well too ( ͡ ͜ʖ ͡)

Beautifully written. Simple as that.