This isn't really a bad fic. Really, it's not. You exxagerate some things, sure. Who doesn't nowadays.

The one thing that really bothers me is your avatar. It's adding unneccesary complications to what would otherwise be a perfectly ok, if not a little unoriginal, fic. It makes you come off as an egomaniac by even creating such a D&D character, much less using him as an avatar in a fanfic. If you would take all mention of the avatar out, I might even say this fic shows some real promise.

You show some talent in writing. Just know that all-powerful avatars are never a good idea. It stinks of hubris.

more more MORE! I really can't wait to see what happens next. Romance between Ranma and Ryo-Ohki? HA! Definately going to subscribe to this one. Looking forward to the next chapter (couldn't you tell?) Kudos

Couldn't find a damn thing wrong with it. I've even been wanting to read a Ranma cabbit story, as I recal only ever reading one of any reasonable length and I have a thing for CuteCreature!Ranma fics. Ranma as anything cute or helplessly feminine is certainly Tsundere and therefore moe.

Note you need to bring in Azusa Shiratori (the ice skater klepto with the cute fetish).

I also recall reading a dragon!Ranma fic where Kasumi takes Ranma as a pet, and while it might have been done before I think it could be done to a more adorable or humorous extent (Bows, heart shaped tag on collar, vet, etc.). With Kasumi being who she is, Ranma would be able to much more than endure. Maybe Kasumi ends up feeding Ranma better than the family, carrot cake, carrot heavy stews, etc.

I apologize for my rambling, but plz update frequently.

interesting story, hard to follow thought.

Than again, maybe I am sleepy

Interesting way to start a story.

I like the all knowing narrorator viewpoint, its rather humerous and unique. I look forward to seeing how this story goes, and will make sure to have my phrase book handy.

By the way, nice title.

PLEASE! OH GREAT AND POWERFUL TIGEE I HUMBLE ASK YOU TO GO ON WITH YOUR STORY!

lol looks like it has some potental plz update when you can