i liked it but ,this isnt what i have expected for an sasuke X naruto fanfiction . it was just...out of place
(not a hater dont worry)
peace \m/

that was a really great read

Really nice work!

i like the way you phrase your words...time seems to flow smoothly and each scene blends seamlessly into one other...

on the other hand, it kinda makes me grin how you've portrayed sasuke's psyche. trust him to be a major emo queen about his issues esp with naruto, lol

Solid work. Everyone felt IC, and the story flowed well. I personally would have preferred a slightly happier ending (though this one can be interpreted as happy, it would have been nicer if there was closure) - at the same time, I actually think this ending suits the story, so either way, well done.

That was...just so them, lol

I loved it

i was going to review this so much sooner, but ffnet was having problems and i couldn't click on the review link and then i forgot about it and then...you know the rest.

anyway, i really like this. the way you have it from sasuke's point of view and how you express his thoughts in the kind of abstract, apathetic way- it's really reminiscent of his character. i love the orange mug and that sasuke broke it and naruto didn't care except that sasuke fixed it up. great fic! XD

This was a great story. It never got too intense, but the feelings were still really understandable. I loved it.

nice very nice

Since I'm so used to seeing things through Naruto's perspective, it's always refreshing to see things through someone else's POV. Even though Sasuke's almost always makes me go "Cheer up emo kid." :P

I found it funny and kinda frustrating that even though those two mean so much to each other, they keep misinterpreting one another. Naruto tries to give Sasuke the space he thinks he needs, while Sasuke just wants the old Naruto back PLUS when Naruto doesn't notice the little things Sasuke does (make the bed, break his cup) it seems that he doesn't really care about Sasuke. ARGH! I really wanted to shake Kakashi and say "Damn it, you're the adult! Impart some of your infamous wisdom onto your stupid students!"

Hmm. I don't like Karin (much less a paring between the two), but I'm kinda glad that Sui made Sasuke kiss her in her final moments. Huh. Well, I do think Sui would probably become some kinda mercenary rather then join Konoha so yeah. And finally Juugo goes to the person he should have gone to in the first place. I mean: Legendary Traitor vs. Legendary medic nin? Geez.

I have say... when Sasuke said Itachi and Naruto where missing from his dream does that mean they're the only ones still important to him? I'd like to think so :P Also, it was Naruto waiting for him down that road, yes?

“Everything about you is important to me.”

FINALLY. I knew you wouldn't fail me Naruto! Now maybe Sasuke can stop being stupid :P

this was awsum. i'm not into talking/writing so i won't force myself. luvd it. will check out your stuff later.

That story was really cute. It's just the way I imagined Sasuke's mind working. Very cute. XD

I hate to admit it, but I react in the same way to tea with sugar .;;

Sasuke wasn’t that blind yet

my my... somebody admits his "blindness" :O

‘Stupid’ was Naruto’s thing, not his.

hahaha... I bet it is... :P

Sugetsu told him to do that? I'm impressed :O

LOL Sakura... Kakashi... Who'll be next? XD

“House arrest,” she said, “until I make up my mind what use I should put you to. Go back to Naruto’s and stay there.”

Oh God... Poor Sasuke XDD Everyone is against him ;

“Since it’s Naruto we’re talking about…” She opened the fridge and groped for a small wrinkled tube. “Here you are!”

I think I died ._.

And it makes me wonder who's slower at noticing things...

Sorry, honey, I didn't intend to make fun of Sasuke, but somehow it ended in this way in this review ;_; Forgive me?

I liked it!

Is not quite direct, not quite saying what you wanna say, yet you do! I like it I like your style, is refreshing and is smoother in teh way of how they evolve