this is really sad with a beautiful ending

this is awsome and sad jaypaw rocked

Wow, this is really good! Poor Jaypaw.. and Leafpool...

So...Sad. So...good. WAH! Really beautiful! Loved it!

Krystal: Well this is truly breath taking! :) You have the story detailed perfectly and- and ...POOR JAYPAW!

So... so very sad. I love you. You really portrayed the characters greatly. And Jaypaw is my favorite character. This story was written so beautifully that my heart wrenched.

*subtly adds story to favorites*

That was so tragic! Poor Leafpool, poor Jaypaw. This is beautifully written, and a great mini-plot.

You depress me.

Oh! This is terribly sad :( But amazingly written. Really really really good job. I liked it.

You've shown it well, believable reaction, especially when Crowfeather came in.

I don't think Leafpool would actually say how it hurts, but who knows?

~PT

AW! WAH! POOR JAYFEATHER! *cries* *sobs hysterically*

*sniffle* ~Lightkit

This story is so sad that I cry. Anyway are you going to keep going on this story?

that was so sad...

Aww...sad.