I loved the sweet Jack and Carly parts, but you rushed it a little- Jack loved Carly with all his heart and wouldn't be swayed so suddenly by an assistant he has treated with such ruthlessness for years xD Lol, I really liked the tenderness, but it didn't work as well as it could have, because they were at Carly's grave. Minage was being horrible "she had nice eyes"!

And what's wrong with CarJack? Carly and Jack both loved each other so there's nothing wrong with writing just a little bit about them. And you made Jack visit her grave, so why wouldn't there be some talking about their relationship? 2/5

man, you seriously made me let loose the waterworks on me, that seriously made me cry a little

0_0 i can't believe u wrote 1 either. But nevertheless it was very well written. We will be keeping the hope alive until the undeniable proof comes along. Keep writing those awesome fics!