Really nice story :) I'm madly in love with Yazoo and Cloud. Therefore...can't wait for the next chapter! ;) I hope you'll continue this story.

haifisch;

i really like your story, as it is kinda hard (or so it seems to me at least)to find good yazoo x OC stories but he's my fav... i wonder why you haven't updated so long, i hope you don't plan on putting this story on hiatus o.o but as it is almost 4 am and i kinda need to sleep this'll be the end of my short, kinda pointless review;

i hope you continue soon

kyoki no megami

maDAlexa

Love this! Yazoo's totes awesome! You make Kadaj sound so scary, and he's mai favwit! T.T well, whatever he is insane. O.o Anyway, this is great! Hope you can update soon!

:D I enjoyed this chapter. It's great. Haha

This story is amazing! I can't wait till the next chapter. (:

Can't wait for the new chapters!

i really like your story, its awsome! im really excited to see were this is going. please update soon! and yeah, i know how you feel about the writers block, cause im haveing some to! .

This story is great! Please update it soon! I just realized that I had the same idea as you-for the character I mean. I had planned to have my OC person for one of mine with black and...more like white hair. But this is awesome 3

Prologue was great! I'm going to read more now xD

Haha, interesting chapter... Yazoo is so weird, but I think his actions fit with his personality... Anyways, good luck with the next one!

The story sort of caught my attention. Your writing style is pretty good. I can't say much due to the fact that there's only two chapters. When you update more, I'll see what I could criticize on. (In another words, I like your story, keep up the good work!)

That story was amazing I most especially liked the last part.I hope you continue the story I'll be waiting of it :D

I love this so far! It's captured my interest, and I hope you update it soon.

I'm interested in seeing where this is going! Yazoo's ALMOST as cool as Kadaj, so I'm okay with the main romance being centered around him. ) Good luck with the next chapter.

I'm enjoying this story.

Please, oh please, continue.

Btw, you were close with the creatures. They're called Shadow Creepers.