I absolutely love this story! I wish you would write more like it, and that you had time to write more on here...

I truly have no idea who I like best in your stories. Which adult, at least. Maybe Glorfindel? But Elrond and the restorative... And there's always Thranduil. :D Great writing!

And what happens next?

Omg! Too hilarious. Inconvievable.

Great job writing this!
The antics of little Legolas and Arwen are hilarious

i like your story better than lembas. everyone is so amusing

Hahahahaha Gandalf is a dwarf! Nice work.

"Ada likes me better than lembaaaaas..." I laughed so hard there :)

OMG the cuteness is overwhelming! I loved reading this and I even laughed out loud (I don't do that often when reading). Nice job!

Holy Jesus! It was brilliant! I can't tell you how many times I giggled at the elflings or laughed at Gandalf. Or feared for their lives when the orcs attacked. I simply adore your stories with little Legolas and Arwen. Wonderful job! :)

At the end i fear for Gandalf's life! LOL nice story

That was so funny. Poor Gandalf

Aww, little legolas and Arwen are so cuuute! I like the way you wrote the story from the kids' point of view, making the adults seem all the more confusing to them for it. And how Arwen just kept going 'told you he was a dwarf'...that had me struggling not to laugh aloud every time!

Again Kasmi, I am left in awe of your work... I laughed every second word and am crazy about Arwen and Legolas as elflings. I loved the whole thing that they both though that pride and figure of speeches are something you can make like Lembas. Thanks for a great read, you made my day

haha this is really cool!

Legolas was swift and deadly. And running out of arrows.

That made me laugh!