Nice I always liked thud because of escape from the mysterious beyond where he had more of a personality

Love it keep it i want a sequel and will take over if you want.

This is a very good short story hope you make more like this ̮

I love the carnivores trio to:3

Perfect! I still admire that!

Umm, not that I'm complaining, but is there any reason why there's no ChomperxRuby fanfics anywhere? I would've expected that pairing to be a pretty obvious one.

Fantastic! You should do more stories around the sharpteeth trio

You should at least watch the tenth movie cause I found that one to be very enjoyable. Don't know about the other three though.

that was a really great story i truely enjoyed it.

this is a really good story.

This is it what I call a great story. I only wish you will write them more. :)

Great one-shot! I'm starting to like stories where Redclaw, Screech, or Thud (Or all 3) are portrayed as good guys.

I wonder if a sequel to this is possible...

not bad it actully pretty good if you have the time I also just recently uploaded another fic which is land before time unleashed 2 redemption which is a sequel to land before time unleashed which I uploaded years ago