Confetti its a parade

If there is such a thing as tastefully-done Elricest, this is it. It provides a very understandable premise for why the two would be having sex, and it is just generally a nicely told tale. If you're gonna do it, do it right! Nice yaoi action, too.

Smexy! Loved it! No...wait...I LOVE YOAI!

SQuEEEE! i love this so much and i need more in my life!

Max

...what? i hate writing stories that have to with vaginas. how did i become a lesbian from that? xP

umm...so does that mean your a lesbian?

Wow this was great! Ah brothercest. I'm in the same boat as you... i know its twisted, but soooo smexy. Please write more Elricest! you're reallllly good a it! ~

I LOVE THIS STORY! it was one of the best. and what i liked is that you know how most stories dont use there orignal personality but OOC? (srry if i confused you)you made the characters personality the exact same as in FMA! Thankies for writting it!

absolutely amazing!i loved it!

-nosebleed- Oh god I love this couple so much! And this was amazing! That was really hawt. xD

AMAZING! I loved it! One of the best yaois I have ever read!XD

*le barf* I got bored and needed something to read, not really into Elricist, but very well written

You had some problems with your grammar and word usage, but overall it was a good story.

I realy liked this story. I thought that it was cute n well written. I also like boyxboy over boyxgirl. I like brothers together as well. Thank you for this story.