now this is how it should of ended. Detective John Carson was a good guy, who Tony was momentarily jealous of when John flirted with Ziva in front of Tony. Then its revealed he was Jeanne's ex. Too bad NCIS didnt keep him around.

Great little insight into what Tony could have been thinking. I would definitely read if you decided to add more.

I liked it. Darned good story. Good insight into Tony.

If you want to continue an exploration of Tony's feelings that would be good!

An interesting idea, something we all expected, dating Jeanne didn't make his feelings for Ziva go away. Very interesting

aww, Tony!