Dear LORD! Holy fuck! Where is my heart? When I look down at my chest all I see is a hole... Gods, this was painful to read! I honestly wanted to stop!

Jesus, you had me gasping! I felt like there was a hand around my throat depriving me of oxygen! Ugh, I hate triangles! I hate how conflicted it makes the characters! I hate how someone always has to choose! Poor Dino! Poor Mira! Poor Angelo! Damn you, Xanxus!

Now I need ice cream and a fluffy movie after reading this!

NOOOOOOOO! WHY! Gods, I'm so conflicted! This has to be one of the hardest triangles I've ever read! Poor Mira! I hate being stuck in a corner with a choice - an extremely hard, emotionally scarring choice! Argh!

Dino is such a sweetheart! Definitely a keeper, then there is... Xanxus, the epitome of bad-boy, and a professional asshole. It's the white knight against the dark dragon.

I feel guilty for Mira because even I can't resist the allure of the dark dragon...

FUCK! I hate ultimatums! *Clutches stuffed polar bear tightly*

Okay I HATE YOUUUUU WHY DINO DAMN NO I WAS TOTALLY SHIPPING DINO WITH MIRA MAN
Xanxus' too much of an ass to actually be a lover tch
Also you didn't explain shit about her flames and family either. And the last chapter was confusing as hell. Was that Byakuran? Idek

I FEEL LIKE I JUST WATCHED CARRIE THE MOVIE WHAT FUCK IS THIS

It's not really the angst that's the problem. I think that It's just the convenient series of coincidences. Don't get me wrong, I love the story, but just a little constuctive criticism.

SOOO...Mira almost died in that accident and byakuran saved her?the baby she thought died has actually survived?xanxus thought she was dead?mira's in coma?what happened to Angelo?

Nvm...
Good story!:)

That ending confused the effsocks out of me.
Seriously.
Where did Byakuran come from?
But this was a great story! Just the perfect mix of angst, fluff, romance, humor and terrifying Mafioso OCs!

*Forevercrying*
I'v read your story for 10 times by now ..
But I'm to shy to review because of my english .
Anyway .. I REALY LOVED REBORN .. BUT I LOVED IT MORE after reading your story .
Sometimes while I'm watching reborn I imagine mira with them XD it would be great if she was in the anime with cute angelo .
I couldn't read any another reborn fiction after i read yours .. for me its THE BEST story I've ever read .
Thank you so much .
And hope you will continue the grimm brothers soon

And sorry for my poor english :(

Omg, this was a brilliant ending! I love how you introduced Byakuran! Brilliant, brilliant, brilliant! I wonder how Xanxus will react to the knees that his wife is alive and he has a daughter!

Omg ..that did not just happen .. I think I'm about to cry . ...that ending was too sad :'( . Anyway I liked your story , great job

... What.
What?
I... I don't understand what happened.
WHAT.
HOW IS THIS AN EPILOGUE.
YOU - THIS - MIRA!
HOLY SHIT!
IS SHE DEAD? IS SHE IN THAT FLUID?
WHO IS THAT WOMAN?
I don't even remember the parts of the story that don't involve XanxasXMira or DinoXMira! And now, this?!
YOU TOTALLY JUST KILLED OFF XANXAS'S HAPPY LIFE. AND SQUALO'S. AND ANGELO'S. AND MIRA'S. AND- AND- AND- EVERY SINGLE HAPPINESS THAT WAS IN THIS STORY HAS JUST BEEN KILLED OFF.
THIS IS NOT THE HAPPY ENDING YOU DECEIVED ME INTO BELIEVING IT WOULD BE!
EXPLAIN YOURSELF.
:O

that story was really good, and i truely enjoyed it. but how can you end it that way. i feel like you just ended on a cliffhanger. now i will forever wonder what happened to Xanxus and Angelo and all the others. also too im going to guess that is her daughter with Byakuran that marshmallow eating weirdo. anyways very good story :)

There's going to be a sequel...right? I'm not mad at the ending since I've become so accustomed to open endings. But it just kind of screams there's more.
But I have really enjoyed this story you've written! I started rereading it yesterday because I thought that that was the last chapter. I love your writing style and hope to see more of your works in the future!

Well, this is my first and last review on this story. So sorry! -bows- I didn't review at all although I enjoyed it. So I shall review the ending! :D

Angelo is so cute! -kyaaaaaaa- I can totally imagine him with Mira's eyes and Xanxus's looks. :3 Mira had it tough, marrying a rough husband who doesn't know how to show normal affections. But she clearly can handle it. Guess love conquers all huh. So, the accident planned by Mr. Marshmallow? That naughty naughty guy -hmph-

Ending's totally screaming 'SEQUEL!' And WALA, it's there at your profile, shouting, 'Read me!' Off I go -stops- Oh before that, you totally created an awesome plot (Y) and I LOVE HIS SALVATION 3 Looking forward to your sequel too! Keep writing 'cause fans out there are waiting! :D CIAO

Wait, so Mira died? Where did this girl who appears to be Mira's and Xanxus's daughter come from? Byakuran saved her or is this an alternate reality/dimension/universe? So confused right now?