Lmao you’re authors note at the bottom sent me

I enjoyed this. I wish they’d found some closure with their parents but I get why that didn’t happen in the story. I particularly liked this Bella’s stubborn streak - I thought it was really unique in the way that you could get this across without her seeming petulant or immature.

hmmmm fucking a stranger hours after nearly being violently sexually assaulted. that makes sense. in a psychological complex screaming for help kind of way.
had such high hopes for this story. rip

"you're in a gym, retard"
"a look that said i wanted to rape it".
jesus christ. definitely a 2010 story. i hope problematic language like that isn't a theme in this story.
there are a lot of run-on sentences and the tense switches from past to present in a confusing way, and bella seems to not care for her safety (not to mention leaving the car running with a strange man in it to go pick up stuff in a store? he could've stolen her shit so easily. although i guess lack of self-preservation is canon).
this chapter also seemed very rushed. but i'm intrigued. i hope they dont end up sleeping together in 2 seconds.

Great fic thanks for sharing have fun

Hello,

I just finished this work of art and I am completely amazed. This story was wonderful and I loved every second of it. I mean their whole relationship and characters are so tough, kind of not healthy but it's just so beautiful. Thank you for writing it, I really couldn't put it down.

I think the only thing that confused me a bit was the whole will/non-resolved relationship with his mother. I think there could have been a bit more detail in the epilogue, I mean, what happened to his childhood house and the lands in Ireland?

Anyway, thank you very much for writing it, as well as the fanfic recommendations and music in the fic.

Anna

Muy buena historia! Me gusto leerla.

Lovvvvve so far! Xo

You know this was my favorite fanfiction back in the day, now i’m gonna read it again after all these years. Thank you for writing such a wonderful fiction! You should write a future take if you have time.

I can’t believe I missed this fic when it was a wip ...thanks for sharing.

Has she met jasper?

Alice? Rose?

When the guys realize bella has no place to go?

When was the last time she slept?

I LOVED your story.
I just came across this story and so glad I found it.