this is awesome...i think it totally captures both kevin's and gwen's feeling about their so called "relationship". they need to hurry up and realize they need each other! lol!

Not too badly written for a Gwevin story BUT Kevin technically NEVER knew Gwen when they were younger, they spoke few words to her and he rarely bothered with her.

Plus about Kevin, sure, I'm sure he feels bad about his past but worry about 'tainting' Gwen, I don't think so and he didn't know her so how could he know she'd changed?

You need to explain a lot more.

That was great. Wonderfully written, wonderfully introspective (and done realistically, thank goodness.)

Aw, that was sweet. Well, not really. But you get it. ) Is it finished? ~Xeppy

Ha! Ha! You're whole caveman-thing both made me laugh and motivated me. This was very well-written and separated a;most flawlessly. I'm sure if you keep writing stories you can improve enough to turn words into works of art. Good Job!

i liked it alot! your pretty good, i really hope to see some more and soon! we really need more kwevin in the world! XD im thinking about making a fan fiction? idk, anyhoo, great work and update soon!