Beaten down, almost murdered countless times…?

Goodbye

this is one of the best fanfictions i have read keep up the good work

Liked the story at first I had trouble getting into it when the WOW cross over really got into it, but after a few chapter I enjoyed.

I hope for more NaruHina romance you are known for soon.

Please continue the story I am looking forward to when the akatsuki come in and the chunin exams.

Naruto and Hinata Forever:)

... lfg quotes ftw z

I am sorry but due to the broken nature of the chapters so far, I can not read this without getting a headache

chuck norris is a BOSS

Im saddened this story was never finished since it was really good and it was a crossover fic.
I hope you can continue writing in the future.

-fire

And, OF COURSE, you DIDN'T finish this.
You PIECE of... a writer.
LOL or NO.

Darth vader: Welcome to the Dark side, are you suprised we lied about the milk and cookies?

Omake, wtf

LMAO

It's a shame you seem to have abandoned this fic and all of your other ones, I seriously liked this one. What happened, just no longer interested in writing, or did you perhaps kick the bucket? If it's the former, than at least tell us and not leave your readers hanging all these years.

I judge them by reading the first chapter, and then basing the rating of off, the quality of ch.s, the quantitiy, and how long it takes factoring in possible problems to make it fair. Only when its crappy, short, and takes over 2 months between updates do I skim the other ch.s for any quality ups, or length improvements. Unfrotunately, to few are good based of off these qualities.

at ch. 4, i have a amendment to make. You can beat a dwarf in drinking, you just have to be a giant, dragon in dragon form, a mage that can teleport the drink from his stomach on sasgay, or undead so that it'll go right through you, or be drinking a drug that ur imunne to but not the dwarf. perhaps a ogre as well. I'm not pompous or anything, I just want to point that out for when you DO make the rest, as its not having the 'complete' figure to it, the dwarf will get its ass kicked in that area. That'd bring'em down to his short self.

I love the prolouge... its not very common for me to comment after the first chapter but you have earnt it... there are very few stories i love... and this is definitely one of them from today...
A very believable mix of two universes... it can take a beautiful turn if done right, guess i'll be seeing in a few minutes how this entire thing turns out... beautiful imagination, artistic use of words and a nice subtle character building... if the plot is as good as this, i have absolutely no idea what this fic is doing in the ninth page of naru/hina fics sorted by favorites... this should be everyone's favorite, its the essence of fanfiction, this is what it really should be