Love it

Please update soon

Can't wait to find out what happens next :)

I loved the story and can't not wait till you update it.

Jessi! - my bestest best frend in the WHOLE wide world! Really sorry im reviewing this late ... got caught up in work :(

But anyways bout ur chapter .. OMG! A MAD MAN HAS BROKEN LOOSE FROM JAIL! AAH! :O i fink saki has a good point and im guessing he rlly DID break jail, eh? OMG! I cant wait to see what happens soo you better update soon! :P you dont want a broken leg do you? MWUHAHAHA! ouch my throat hurts ughh so much for a sore throat ... it doesnt make you seem evil enough! lol

And you weer right. Even though the chapter WAS short - it was important! VERY important! xD

And ohh! i finally understand why ur story is called "Navy Brats" now. It makes soo much sense, now! and lol: "It’s never a good thing to have TWO blondes acting all serious." ahaha! i was literally LOL at that one! hehe

x update soon!

Aw...You poor child.(pats on head)I actually didn't get a lot of homework this week...IT'S A CONSPIRACY! A CONSPIRACY I TELL YOU! THEY'RE LULLING ME INTO A FALSE SENSE OF SECURITY!(runs around like a madwoman)

Craziness aside, this was a very good chapter! Short, sweet, and to the point! And I think that Daniel is a STALKER! But that's just me and my mind. Here's a cookie!(gives you giant Amu cookie)I dunno...I just had the sudden urge to give out a cookie of her. OOH! AND I CAME UP WITH A SHUGO CHARA IDEA! If you want to figure it out for yourself, here's how: Go to chapter 38. Go to the page where she says she wants to hold him. Examine the area in which Ikuto's head rests. Laugh hysterically when you get it.

Oh yeah, I'm that good.

Yay! I'm not the only one with a birthday on a day off from school in the fall! My birthday's on November 28th, meaning I'm always on Thanksgiving break for my birthday! YAY ENFORCED SCHOOL BREAK SYSTEM!(does happy dance)Anyway, here's a cookie for you!(gives you giant cookie in the shape of pizza)Yummy!

WOO HOO! lol. glad to know that u remember we (the reviewers and reader) exist and still update! :P

Nice chapter! lol, i was thought it was gonna be boring since u said that u lost interest. but it wasnt boring at all! believe it! :]

ooh, im curious now! i wonder who this daniel mackenzie guy is... u better update soon cos i rlly wanna know and im bursting to find out! i mean, for shikamaru to be alert, that rlly is something! lol

oh ur going school on 1st sep? haha, i'm gonna go back on the 7th! (ur b'day! D) lol, lucky u, u get to go to scool a week early! ;D so wait, how many weeks of holiday do u have?

anyway, i cant wait for ur update! update soon! i'll be waitin! ...as paitiently as i can! (although, im not that paitient!) :

update sojn.i hate it when u have that feeling ur beiong i was little i always got home form schoolk and i was by myself i always had that feeling someone was watching me..look forward to teh next chapter

the suspense is killing me! I wonder who's following Saku! Oh and what's this, Sasuke's talkin more than normal? Wow! Something must have hit his head! And it must have hit him real hard! lol! I luv ur chapter! I can't wait for more so update soon! Oh and u get to see famous (and some not so famous) bands whilst you work? Wow - I would totally get a job if I would be able to do that! Anywayz, gud luck with managing ur time!

WHOO! Go Jessi-chan, listening to famous bands while working! And I THINK you MIGHT have a way to go to your own anime convention...Otakon ain't the only one out there...You've just gotta search for them! Or locate your local anime and manga fans...That one might be your best bet...ANYWAY! Have fun with the work, good luck with the babysitting that I believe you're doing, here's a cookie to help you update faster!(gives you giant cookie in the shape of digital camera)OMG! SOMETHING RELATED TO THIS CHAPTER! HAVE I GONE MAD? I think you know the answer to that...

i love your story

please update soon :)

Nay, I won't call you a hypocrite. I mean, right now I'm spending my free writing time listening to Hanyuu's character song from Higurashi no Naku Koro ni. IT'S SO FREAKING CUTE! I LOVE YOU HANYUU! Anyway, this is a good chapter! Keep on trucking! And I know it has nothing to do with this, but whatever. Here's a cookie!(gives you giant cookie in the shape of Hanyuu)Look her up! She's freaking adorable! Too bad she only appears in the last season...DAMN IT! Ah well, I've still got Rika...YAY!

Hey! It's Sakurulz! (yay!, i'm a member now!) I luv ur story so far! And oh, i wonder who's following them! And gud luk for next weekend - i feel it , but I'm sure you'll be able to make it! btw, I totally sympathise with u about losing the story plot - man, u've had a busy week with exams, canada day, losing ur plot and more than 40 hrs work! (ur only 14 and u work? wow, u make me look lazy, but then again i don't think getting a job at 14 in England is possible!) Wow! I've no idea how you will find the time to update next week, but just make sure you update as soon as you can! There wasn't that much action this time, and i guessng there will be in the next one! :)

very cool! I really like this story!

update

btw, thanks for commenting my story as well! I appreciate it! D 3

~Cherrii~

OMG! I didn't notice ur author comment at the bottom and i was just reading the chapter again and i noticed my name! i'm so glad i encouraged u to continue ur story! I feel so happy! Thanks so much Jessi-chan! u made my day! :) lol! ur probably thinkin "what a freak!" but it's true, i'm just glad i made someone happy and inspired them to continue their story! i'll make sure i check for updates every day! so plz dont't let me down! who knows, i might even join fanfic as a member!

Whoo! Go Jessi-chan and her updating while she's busy! Tis like Superwoman, only not with the powers! WHOO! Anyway, this was really good, and here's a cookie!(gives you giant cookie in the shape of Yoru) I...don't really have a reason for giving this out...Just wanted to.