This was really good. Awesome story!

Wow, that was an awesome chapter.

Good stuff!

I'm here eight years late...But I have to comment. THIS was HEART BREAKING...And so graphic, Sammy and the tracheotomy. I felt the pain when I was reading!
And the end...Poor Sammy, my heart.
Just...Only...Your fic is so beautiful and painful and I love it! I love your write and your narration. Just love it
I would to like write more, but my english words are limited. Just, you're a great writer

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;) gooood work

This is brilliant man. I felt so sorry for Sam and could relate to him, poor dean for being stuck in the middle, and with John I didn't know if I wanted to kill him or feel sad for him. Brilliant writing and plot thought

I need more of,this...

Very interesting. I love where you've taken the story, kinda risky, but well written.

This story is so well written, so sad and frustrating, its like you can feel Sam's depression so badly and really want to hug him and take him away and make things all better but you know they won't be any better.

This fic right here! I've been looking for it everywhere! I couldn't remember the title or you (the magnificent author) and it was killing me not knowing where to find it!

This is my third (fourth? fifth? tenth?) Time reasoning this story and it keeps getting better every time!

This is a sixteen year old boy John placed into this danger. There is no possible excuse.

Damn. You wrote that monster up very, very nicely. Where did you find it or is it all you very own?

I'm trying to find words to describe how this story made me feel - it was like an emotional rollercoaster. I spent most of the story so damn angry with both John and Dean and all of the story with my heart breaking for Sam. It's always been a bugbear of mine that John insisted the way the lived and the things they did were to keep them safe when in fact it was John himself who put them constantly in danger. I do understand that for a lot of it he thought he was doing the right thing but a massive part of it was vengeance and there is no more selfish reason in the world to do anything. Even Dean in this story had me wanting to scream and shake him. Beautiful writing, if you can evoke that much of a reaction you've done an excellent job.

I am positive that I have said before just how wonderful this story was, still is, and just wondered if it was linked under a different author intake. Still have to say beautiful writing, something the current paid writers of the show should be forced to read and take on board of what the brothers are all about!