Okay, um, to be honest I'm not too sure how I wanna review... I guess I'll start with how incredibly striking and extraordinary I think this is and... and I really, eagerly, impatiently, and hoping that you'll decide to write more of this incredibly addicting fic! There's so many things I wanna know about... like: when will Seto and Atemu meet? And, will they get together? And, how's Atemu gonna live in the present? And, what's really happened in the last three years? And, will Atemu go to school with Mokuba?! That'd be funny? Oh, oh, will Mokuba have a crush on Atemu? Will everyone gawk at Yami cuz... well, he's Atemu... so... nevermind, I'm just biased and I guess I expect people to stop and gawk in awe of him... anyways, will Yami send anyone to the shadow realm or mind crush evil villains? Are there evil villains? No offense to the Pharaoh, but... he's a danger magnet and... I guess I'm just curious if that holds true in this fic. Gosh, I am so sorry for my many, ridiculously many, questions... though, I don't regret asking cuz this fic was so good that it made me super curious!

write moreeee!

will this have Bakura?

I can't wait until the next chapter~! I hope you feel better so you can write more. You have a great work here and I really, really, really want to read~

Ah, sorry for taking forever!

I'm really looking forward to the next chapter, to see what everyone else has been up to, and by everyone else I mean Kaiba. So far I'm also enjoying Yuugi's personality.

I did notice two more then/than mix ups, but other than that I can't think of anything else that was grammatically incorrect. Granted, my brain is feeling a lot like mush right now.

Update soon!

Sounds good! Honestly, it does. It makes me wish that the chapters were longer, only because that would mean that there was more to read. The only thing I really have to point out is that you keep misusing "then" when you mean "than". I think you should correct that, but otherwise the story so far is really good. I hope you continue it soon.

oh..I wanna know what has changed..next!