This is a retarded naruto story

i feel bad for naruto he is a hero and he deserves to be love and have a family but after after of this he still stay alone and unlove. i can't of hate this hinata since she just went after kiba after spending so much time having faith on naruto and stay loyal to him.

awesome

omg longest chapter ever O_O but holy shit did that sum up a lot of stuff. Actually that was an awesome ending and storyline for what it was XD
You should write more about Binine :3 even tho this story is rly old XD

I. Am. SPECHLESS! That was so amazing I am unable to describe it! The way you finish it not know wether or not he is alive or dead is jut so... AMAZING! I truly love this story and you have a unique gift, so utilize it!

Good story. It's hard to believe that Hinata married Kiba just because his family's name.

wow a ghost protector

it's kind of sad that naruto is still alone at the end of story though

but I really like your story

Arg seriously this was the most depressing crap I've read that was so well written though I did enjoy it but what was the point ugh. Angst on this level baffles thee adult mind to no end I'm trying to see this from his point of view but I just can't life sucks make it better if your home isn't welcoming to you then it's not your home find it seriously great story though.

Rewrite or delete this story, so many errors. You change the paragraph without changing the speaker, which would be fine but you also dont change the paragraph when you do change speakers. Grammatical and even spelling errors are not rare. You are in desperate need of a beta.

i love this is unusal then most one-shots but i like.

keep up the goodwork.

That was a really great fic. angsty a bit but it ended on a very optimistic note.

this is one more in the best i read i loved it it was good its now hard to find stories like this for naruto good job keep it up plz!

very moving albeit sad that Naruto was to forever be alone.

Great Job.

Awesome story

OMG

This is AWESOME!

3 thumps up!