Very exciting. The tempo of the story is just right; not too fast not too slow. You don't get long winded into explanations and provide just enough detail to progress the character development (at least in terms of abilities and such). Don't know why you haven't updated in over 10 years but I hope you can come back soon and continue the story. Thanks for writing!

Amazing story and details. You have potential but, a flaw I noticed in your story is character development. For all I know you could gotten better at developing the characters. I hope to see more of your work. If you get this notification and write on another site, may I have your username and site name?

Perso je déteste le viol mais ici dans cette situation cela aurait pu arriver c'est le monde d'un ninja j'espère que cela l'a fera sortir de son angouement pour Sasuke, les fans sont outre je pense mais si ils étaient honnête cela aurait pu arriver car elle est une honte pour la proffesion c'est une blague qu'elle soit la kunoichi de l'année.

Pour le couple je verrai bien Naruto avec Hana et Anko avec une option sur Kurenai.

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Update? Probably not

Update this please

can't wait for the next update

I really want to see what happens next. Looking forward to the next chapter. Keep up the great work!

Love it. update soon.

You should not have stopped making this story! It is very good! It would be very nice of you if you could find it in you to do more of this story please?!

that was good keep the chapters coming

I am really liking where this story is going. I just want to let you know that ice realise is a combination and water and air chakra. So I was just hoping to see naruto learn some air justu

I find a good Naruto Fox companion story only to find that it's been on hiatus for 7 years. Man rotten luck.

OK I like sakura bashing but near rape is kinda harsh

Dude need new chapters