Reviews for Broken Wings
Ksusha Fray chapter 1 . 6/7
Dear author, your story has struck me to the core. There are many fans of this fandom in our country. Do you mind if I translate it into Russian?
Anavas88 chapter 26 . 5/10
I have read a few of your stories and really like them but this one really moves me! Adore watching hawks and this one is one of my favorites! I am in Chapter 27 now but had to review chapter 26 cause I love boxing! (I did some kick boxing and boxing while living in China) it is a great stress reliever and helped me through a tough patch in life, my husband and I were having issues and he finally took it too far and gave me a month to decide if I wanted to give up something precious or get a divorce, I took my ring off that day to practice boxing and realized I had already made my choose, needless to say anger management was great!
Entertainment lover chapter 1 . 4/23
Awesome chapter. I feel bad for Harry. He has nobody to care for him. I am happy that Harry turned into a Red tailed hawk. I am glad that severus saved Harry. It is nice that Harry found severus's presence comforting
Guest chapter 23 . 4/21
[After chapter 23]
Brother: Why are you smiling like that...?
Me: Utter satisfaction.
Guest chapter 17 . 4/21
You can always count on Delores Umbridge to make you feel undeniably furious :)
Guest chapter 34 . 4/21
Nice story, really different from most others but very well done!
Guest chapter 11 . 4/20
Thank you oh so much, Harry, for the satisfaction of having Umbridge get what she deserved. It was brilliant!
Ysai chapter 19 . 4/8
Happy birthday! I cried when I saw the last few parts it was so sad! But it was awesome! Keep up the good work!
bambiewitch chapter 35 . 2/1
I love everything about this story omg I can’t put it into words- all of my favourite tropes, characters, everything had a place here. Incredible!
albernes Maedchen chapter 13 . 12/22/2019
Would've made more sense to say that Harry had the map inside his robes' pocket when he transformed, so he would have had it this whole time.
Murai-Sakura chapter 34 . 10/19/2019
I could really see your writing skills improve as I furthered into this story. It was awesome to see.
I loved your idea of how to get Harry and Snape together. It was very original and let to some amazing moments. I'm a tad sad that Freedom didn't end up trying to get McGonagall to change into her form to talk to her and get her to help him undo his transformation. I was hoping for that to happen since Freedom was able to talk to Mrs Norris and he didn't know how to undo the animagus form.

Oh my, and how precious was Fawkes? I really enjoyed those interactions! To finally know what was on Fawkes' mind. It was great. I also enjoyed how you put the Slytherins into a new light. Some of them at least. Oh! And the lessons Harry had to do! Absolutely inspired! I loved the first one especially. It was great to see him embrace his inner Snape.

I learned a lot about hawks and falconry with your fic. I've been looking up pictures to be able to visualize your story better ;)

Thanks for this. I'm going to chase down the sequel now.
MS
markco57818 chapter 35 . 10/9/2019
Bravo
Lizzie Brookes chapter 34 . 9/16/2019
Thanks for this wonderful story. I loved it. I'm so glad Snape saved Sirius and that Sirius and Snape buried the hatchet.
FlyingThestrals chapter 25 . 8/18/2019
I love the story but I really think Snape washing Harry’s mouth is out of character. It’s harmful and abusive and Snape really cares for the boy. Plus he didn’t try to punish him for such little things like that as a hawk, telling him off would’ve sufficed, I don’t like how this friendship has gone now that Harry has changed back. They can’t be friends like they were before if Harry is punished for acting like that. I know Snape has to be an authoritative figure to Harry but being rude out of distress and hurt shouldn’t have deserved abuse like that and I really doubt that Snape would’ve done that, especially knowing how Harry’s relatives treated him and I doubt Harry would’ve been quite so trusting of Snape after that. As Harry’s guardian surely it would be okay for Snape to not be so harsh to him outside of lessons?
Sorry about the rant but other than that I love their friendship and the story is amazing!
Losthompson chapter 35 . 8/12/2019
This was so well written and I really have to thank you
This is one of the funniest and well thought out fics I have ever read
The way you wrote sev is amazing
You should be really happy with what you’ve written because it’s AMAZING
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