This was a great little FanFic to read. Great job!

This was a cute story, I enjoyed it :-D!

AWWW THIS MADE ME FEEL FLUFFY INSIDE AWWWWW

AWWWWWWW! I am fangirling so hard!

nice! keep going!

Great story so far, but your just taking the words and plot line for the actual show. You're just adding extra sentences in between. I'm not trying to be mean, it's a wonderful story, but it would be better if you made it up instead of taking lines word for word in the show.

This was a really sweet story! I loved how you turned that episode into a bet. I've always loved James' face when Sarah realizes that he used his ring for her locket ;)

Yes, a clever young gentleman indeed :)

oohh, interesting plot line. I think I'm gonna like this.

anjellyfish:

I love how he'd completely forgotten about the bet! It makes the gift that much sweeter.

~ Blaise Skylark

anjellyfish:

An unspoken attraction? No, really? Wherever did you get that idea? ;D

~ Blaise Skylark

anjellyfish:

Very good chapter! This certainly shines a new light on that episode. :-)

~ Blaise Skylark

anjellyfish:

Heheheheheh! Loves the end. Not everyone can fit a fanfiction into an episode. You're very good. ) I'm off to read the next chapter!

~ Blaise Skylark

anjellyfish:

Nice. I loved this chapter. Phyllis is spelled with a "y," though.

~ Blaise Skylark

anjellyfish:

Very nice. I like it a lot. It's very in character, too, for the beginning of the series at least. And you didn't make any grammar mistakes that I noticed.

~ Blaise Skylark