Very touching. I liked the way father and son drew strength from each other. Scott so often has to be the strongest son so it was warming to have Jeff realise it and be there for him.

Aw, that was such a cute story. It was sad, yeah, but I loved it.

I'm glad Jeff came at the end and helped Scott.

This was a really well written one-shot and I loved it.

Keep up the brilliant work!

Lulu

P.S Sorry I haven't reviewed on Shadow of My fear for a while. I haven't had my laptop for a while but I'll go and do it now.

I guessed it was Scott. He is the most confident and never seems to be able to cry as he's too busy looking after his brothers. I enjoyed this story, was very well written. Loved it, great work :)

You know, I was listening to The Script's 'Breakeven' as I read this, and it was so moving, it made me sniff a bit.

Yeah, I guessed it was Scott, coz he seems to be the one to fall apart away from prying eyes. So glad Jeff was there to comfort him, though. Daddy Tracy's real loveable when he does that.

Any more like this? It was b-e-a-utiful.

Kat XD

Awesome oneshot. I wasn't totally sure it was Scott, but I was hoping it would be. I could so see him holding it all in until he cracked and had to let it all out!

Yay Jeff, you were there when your oldest needed you!

Aaw, this was sweet, honey. Loved the emotions in this, and it really wasn't all that upsetting. It was actually quite encouraging, seeing Scott being given a chance to heal. Plus Jeff was just too perfect in this. Gotta love a cuddley Daddy Tracy. :D

Yeah, I knew it was Scott all along. You see, the line "I hate you for putting my brothers through this" seems to be something that only Scott would say, since that would be one of his primary concerns. But still, it was cute.

Great work, Lissy! You've gotta write more in the future (and update Alan's story!).

*hugs* Love ya!

Awe honey that was absolutely beautiful and so touching. I have to admit that I thought it was Alan or possibly John. It was a nice surprise to see it was Scott.

I'm pretty sure I can guess who gave you the idea for this little story and it really was brill honey. You are so good at capturing emotions and making me wanna cry.

Wow honey, that was amazing. You really know how to make a girl cry. I really thought it was Alan at the beginning. It's nice to see a story that shows the other side to Scott. So many writers focus on him being the strong one. I really loved this, keep up the great writing.

Aww, that was such a sad yet sweet little story. Loved the ending with Scott emotionally healing. As well as Jeff.

Well done, lissysue. I would love to see more of these stories from you.

ooh, another writer who adds Lucy to their stories. Love that little touch.