Thanks for posting this!

I liked the nursery rhymes ;)
Also the telling at the end-very symbolicky

Very interesting. You really excel at invoking a dream-like quality in your stories. I saw the androgyne as an amalgamation of all the children - as if they made a golem that contained pieces of all of them. Great one shot, thanks for writing. -"-

I love the vocab words idea. It's awesome. And 'coruscating' - might use that one day, if I remember it! XD To be honest, I thought it was a time-travel past fic, to start with, and that Voldemort was the stranger, as a boy... but he's not androgenous, so... Anyway, awesome!

Good story

I like. I did not think of Teddy - I thought of Harry, sleepy and unlocking the door by accident. Could easily have been Teddy, because to outlive anyone you must be born before they die. So, they can't have been nextgen.

Shows you re good at leading my thoughts astray.

His is a little gem. A really original story (and how often can one say. That about a fsnfiction? Lol)

this is so great
i love it!

I loved this story, especially the nursery rymes I found myself singign along! Anyway I liked it and told you so bye.

Original idea that I've never seen before, well done

Hmm Interesting idea. :)

A great story. Very well written.

When I clicked on this story, I wasn't expecting it to be very good. Boy, was I surprised!

Your story flows together very well and you do a good job at creating tension! You also made it easy to understand (this is vital for readers), even for those who haven't read many of the books. The "Oh. Sorry. Wrong room..." killed me! They're all so shocked ;D

The glamour part was good, especially when he took it off and he looked exactly the same...I was that person, "Who are you?" Still would have liked to know that, but it leaves it up to your imagination. The action scenes are written well and the rhymes seem very real!

For what could be improved...it seems just a tad unlikely that the Metamorphmagus could just walk through wards set by Dumbledore without even realizing it unless they did it intentionally or were ridiculously powerful, which doesn't make sense if it was a time of peace. There would be no reason for his/her core to get so strong.

Overall, this is a very well-written one-shot with an excellent storyline! Pat yourself on the back :)

I must confess that when I chosed this one shot to read, I didn't really expect what you wrote. I think I expected some simple story with a simple plot and simple ending. However I got the pleasure to read an amazing one-shot, wonderfully written and with a so well constructed plot, where I was constantly left guessimg the next move and always failed to do so (a good thing in my opinion), for you managed to always susprise me (for the best) with the next move, and all I can say right now is "thank you". Congratulations and now if you don't mind I'm going to stop writting this "way too long" rewiew, and reread your story.

PS: I apologise for any mistakes in my writting and sentence constrution, for English is not my first language.

;DDDD

harry rocks!