| Reviews for Behind the Mask |
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  Uhh chapter 1 . 4/22/2012 Nice mon |
| Marcos chapter 1 . 2/7/2012 Awe man . I was wishing for a lemon but I guess not. Good story though). |
 thisisCMpunk chapter 1 . 1/28/2012 this was good you need to update soon |
| rider-of-wind chapter 1 . 10/12/2010 are you going to make another chapter for this story or not |
| Guest chapter 1 . 8/25/2010 Funny! I really liked this story! As an afterthought thanks for not having a lemon. For some reason they take away from the story. Basically if you tell people there's a lemon than they will likely try to skip to the lemon. Great job. |
| spirit-of-energy chapter 1 . 8/21/2010 plz continue update it its one of my favorite storys so far |
| Reece12345678910 chapter 1 . 6/25/2010 why won't you update the story *cries* please update it i want to read more or at least let me adopt it |
| Nau no Firefox chapter 1 . 5/14/2010 CONTINUE THIS DAMN IT IT WAS CUTE AND I WANT TO KEEP READING! |
| Wordlurker chapter 1 . 3/9/2010 I like. Out of all the Vizard, I find Hiyori to be the funniest. There's something *special* about a tsundere midget that flies around (sometimes literally), calling people "baldy" and smacks them with her sandals. This done and over with? Or will we perchance get to see another chapter? Well, in any case... Keep up the good work! |
| OBSERVER01 chapter 1 . 12/21/2009 pretty good and hichigo and zangetsu playing cards is it up |
| anon chapter 1 . 8/1/2009 This is a really good story. A strange pairing, but you seem to be making it work well. Looking forward to updates. |
| Revlid chapter 1 . 7/10/2009 Very cute, and I like the pairing, however slightly OOC they may be. Hiyori giving a backrub without amusing agony on the recipient's part? Unpossibibble! I hope this gets continued. |
| Acekial chapter 1 . 6/22/2009 Well, I have to say, if you do not continue this story i might have to hunt you down and burn you alive. You see, there is a serious lack of GOOD fiction involving Hiyori, and your story here is exceptionally good. That being said, I expect your muse to whip you mercilessly until you produce another chapter to this tale. And if you need someone to beta read chapters for you as well as edit for grammatical mistakes, I would be more than happy to assist you. If you have any questions please email me at , I will be checking for a response from you each day, you now officially have a rabid fan of this story, do not let me down! :) |
| bob15948 chapter 1 . 6/19/2009 great story whens the next update cant wait till then |
| pyrin firestorm chapter 1 . 6/18/2009 write more this is good but it needs a good ending not a huge cliffhanger. |
