ok so i know its 2019 but im so invested in this burgeoning beegaara and sasosasu even tho i came out for the gaanaru, im so glad this fic wasnt deleted bc im having a hella time self indulging. thanks for writing and sharing!

Im enjoying the story so far though i did want to give feed back on the time jumping. You may want to edit and format or label so its a bit more clear when an event is occuring. (Past, present, etc.) I suspect some readers may get lost.

I lowkey found this fic 2 days ago, and seeing as how it hasn't been updated in four years, I'm not sure why exactly I'm writing this. I have however absolutely LOVED what I've had the privelege of reading. So thank you.

Having left the site for a few years, I was happy to see that there were a few more chapters on this fic. Even if you never finished it, I'm glad you left it up. It's still fucking hilarious as hell and absolutely awesome. Please don't delete this one. It's worth the re-read.

awesome, but im so sorry, i can't keep reviewing, im deleting my account on this to go to my other story i've been trying to finish, a narugaa. i don't know you, but keep writing! you are an amazing writer! and you're really good at creating any scenes, but kissing scenes do need some work. good luck with whatever you're doing!
best of luck
a fan :)

happy (late) anniversary!

Hi there, thank you for sharing your work,

Why take broke straight guys down? Cause it's actually really good. I hadn't actually been looking for any AU when I found this but it is well written with lots of humor. Some chapters I couldn't stop giggling.
The plot is very surprising too. Especially Sasori showing up or Konohamaru's vandalism were unexpected. I didn't expect BeeGaa as pairing either. Never read anything like it too... You delivered it very well though.
Your way of characterizing the characters and intertwining it into a real life AU is well done too. I read the whole 17 chapters from start to end only with breaks for sleeping and eating too. I hope you only plan to rewrite it as I really think it's worth saving! I'll follow and put it on my favourites anyway ;)

Okay, I've been enjoying this story but not reviewing. I must say, I love your writing! It's the most realistic and fun read I've ever had the fortune to read on ffn. It's the first time a writer had taken such care in their characters! I don't even feel like this is a naruto fan fiction. It's almost a story on its own.
Don't let me get started on the culture as well. I've noticed that a lot of boy love fan fiction don't seem to understand the guy scene. As a chick from Atlanta, Georgia, the gay and black capital, I had not seen characters with so much real world problems and characteristics until now. I love the gay lingo, the amazing banter, and the funny head canons. I also love your use of the word "nigga." Because black guys use it all the time. To censor that is something that upsets me in fan fiction. I also love the racist undertones some characters have. And Sasuke. .. I've never loved Sasuke so much. He is such a cutie. I cant. Lol and don't apologize for side stories. They are lovely and add so much fun to the plot. I will continue reading with love and appreciation. Thank you for such a great story. You are amazingly talented and I hope you are still writing.

lol, I love how this one shot turned into a seventeen-chapter fic XD

Just a thought, because of the way you characterized Naruto and Sasuke's relationship with insults. An old saying goes like this: "when men hang out together they insult one another, but they don't really mean it; when women hang out together they compliment each other, but they don't really mean it."

Just thought i would share some quick humor before i continued reading.

This is great!

Ohhh, and I also forgot to say that I was wondering if Naruto and Gaara were ever going to actually get together. Because, right now it just doesn't seem like it. And I'd really, REALLLLYYYYY love it if they got together. So, thank you and g'bye people!

Sorry for not updating before but it was to good to stop and reivew! So sorry, and thank you sooo muchhh! Ciao!

Dam it this one to!?
ps I love doctor who awesome satins pit input I guess when u wrote this season 6hadnt come out yet