Reviews for Secret Amu
a-little-crazy-is-good-for-you chapter 1 . 3/13/2013
it is so hard to find good fanfics these days :) keep it up
Guest chapter 6 . 1/16/2013
I like the story and all but what i don't like is how you keep comparing the oc characters with the normal characters -_-
Guest chapter 5 . 1/16/2013
When the heck will ikuto actually come in the story?!
neko-ghrl chapter 21 . 9/7/2012
Romantic and cute. Why did you have to end it at that?
Diamond Starlet chapter 21 . 9/15/2011
XD Great story!
Unknown Acc chapter 22 . 8/30/2011
LOVED IT!
iinactiveuser chapter 21 . 6/19/2011
! I, formally announce that I, have finally finished this AWESOME story! WHEW! But the descriptions about the clothes and the rooms and etc. are really confusing, annoying, irritating and scaring the living day-lights out of me... Please take no offense in that... I, PERSONALLY hate, reading ALOT of those kind of stuff... But I don't mind reading A FEW of them... Anyways, your story is AMAZING and sometimes it seems A BIT CHILDISH! WHO CARES! IT'S AWESOME, CUTE, LOVELY AND I TOTALLY LOVED THE PLOT!

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SnowSwanZ chapter 22 . 2/22/2011
*sniff* Beautiful~
DarlingLove chapter 5 . 7/25/2010
hey i was wondering how you get to see the pictures because the ones in the story isnt fully complete /
animerules96 chapter 21 . 1/1/2010
will thr be a part 2
animerules96 chapter 14 . 1/1/2010
i vote amuto amu and ikuto!:))
TsukiyoTenshi chapter 21 . 12/28/2009
Okay, I haven't read this story in LONG time, so I don't even remember if I actually sent ina review or not. But either way, THIS IS SO GOOD! But, the ending doesn't explain who gets with Amu!
Dawnheart chapter 21 . 12/26/2009
I HOPE YOU HAD A GOOD CHRISTMAS TOO!
Cg2nenetwin chapter 21 . 12/25/2009
Nene:aww~

Cg2:2 cute
Dementra17 chapter 11 . 12/25/2009
The basic plan is good, but you need to add your own flair. Kyo the friggin cat proved my theory that you have copied of numerous things that have already been made. The squads, lieutenants and captains show that you have used ideas from bleach.

The center of the story has been too well planned for an amature. I don't know where you got the soul doll stuff from, but I'm guessing they aren't yours.

This is based on theory and guesswork, but my hunches are often right.

The story is good, but try to write your own story.

I am currently writing my own book, and I have a certain trick. I base every event on what happens to me in my day to day life. I just add detail and fantasy. Try it.

James
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