ahahhahaha this was so entertaining!

Bahahahaha this was so much fun :D. I miss reading this fandom, so it was a pleasant surprise to find this when I was creeping on your Once Upon a Time fics!

Thanks for good feels! Wouldn't hate it if you ever ended up posting a sequel :D

Best,
Kris

Okay?

Funny!

Awesome, so realistic, I hope you write more life with Derek fics , this one and the others are all wonderful ! Have a nice day :)

More please! But can it be real the next time around? They really *are* a good couple.

"her heels hooked over her wrists" made me laugh, thinking of some kind of circus-ready, human Betty Spaghetti! Because of the way you worded that, I needed a second to register what you really meant. I doubt I'm the only person to have that moment.

Oh, and I like this fic-I do-but it had me looking at Nora and saying aloud, "No, it's too soon for that talk!"

of course you ned the companion piece.

Aw, I love your Nora - you can write her again, anytime, and I'll read! She's sensible, but fun loving, and just slightly neurotic - just like on the show!

Good job.

~Solard

I think they still like eachother, & the prank was just a excuse. but then, I am very romanticly-minded.

Sequel please! I loved it, still I wanna know if all of that was really acting and what Nora's mother's instincts are telling her exactly and if they are right...They were so good as she said!:)

That was hilarous! Heheh... FAVORITING!

That was really well done. I love the "yet" last line - shows just how much of a prank it might NOT be in the future. Great foreshadowing.

I wonder how they staged the Dasey movie moment on the couch, and the finger down the spine - that one was sexy.

I hope there's another chapter. Or a sequel or something. That'd be fun to read.

I liked it, a little disappointed that it was all a joke!

wait... so they ARE really together? but they staged that to make it look like they werenet?