Good story and well written. I enjoyed the read and you did the characters justice.

Did you accidently switch the titles for chapter 3 and 4?

That was sooooo good! Loved it!

wow!this story is amazing!i really like it!it deserves more reviews..i cant wait to see the sequel

ngaww ): i love this story . and i love the way you write . and i love how its really proper and intriguing (: and i love the plot (: i love the characters personality's (: .. i love everything (:

but , i hate that im crying , touched by the story ): Sighh

Job well done ; (:

Eeepppp! This is sooo amazing! The battle scence are incredible! Thank u sooooo much for sharing ur art with us!

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WOW! i'm speechless... i have never never in my life read a story as emotional as yours. i dont want to get off sounding dumb but its the truth! this story was just... WOW... still no words to describe. thank you for writing and i look forward to the next one! D"CJ"D

i love your story, it's wonderful!

O-m-g!

u finish there? pleasee we next

a sequel :( well ur history is awesome

i hope that u continue this.

bb ~ 3

Wow your battle scenes are excellent. Awesome job. The story is awesome I will go now and read the sequel.

Finally had time to login and read some fanfictions.

Must say having not read or reviewed since chap6, everything seems to fall into place with the current manga plot which surprising..

(hhm you aint getting some info from THE MAN_KISHI?)

I like the dynamics of the trio, their interactions.

Just becareful with making some of the characters Overlay powerful and others weak. (as it happened with Hinata & Kiba).

All I can say is.. KEEP UP the good work. and thank you.

Was on the edge of my seat the whole way through the story, very well written hope you keep the story going with a sequel

w.t.f. is there a sequel?

That was an amazing story. Very detailed and well-written. You did amazingly well for your first fic. :D

A sequel perhaps?