You know, I like that you ended it differently from all the other love stories and it didn't end well, but this absolutely kills me. I mean it. I think I might've just died.
STEVE, ANNA, WHY?!
I get you were trying to get across the concept that it doesn't always end perfect, but jeez, man.

Argh high ... get together already! Great story!

I'll even raise awareness of this "Good Fic" thing in other fandoms!

Second time I ready this I love it

Amazing story! I just finished reading it, I've been reading it over time. So great but the ending was so heartbreaking!

This isn't a review of this chapter or I don't even know if its of the story. I absolutely love this fan fic, one of my favorites and Steve isn't even one of the Outsiders I like best. I started reading this story when I was twelve and I was writing a fanfic myself, my first one ever since that was also the first year I read the book. I came across this and "Like Causes Without Rebels" around the same time. Both amazing fics (and series)! I loved your writing and it honestly made my little twelve year old self want to write better, along with a sideways smile, the ugly spirit, mars on fire, etc. Only being fifteen going on sixteen now (I feel reaally young compared to a lot of the fandom), I look up to your guys' writings, and you guys have inspired me to look closer at my writing and ditch the Mary Sue's and horrible grammar (its a work in progress). I just wanted to drop this review as sort of a thanks and to praise your writing. I just re-read this for the second time and I'm in love with it again. Keep up the great work! I really hope you still read these :)

D I spent forty chapters invested in their relationship and it ends like that? That's... ( I love Anna (that's saying something because usually I really dislike Outsiders OCs) and how you write all these canon characters and this whole thing is very well written and paced and I love it so much. That ending, though... Man, that's sad.

This is great :)

wow if I didn't know there was a sequel I would
be freaking out! how could you Steve! :(

FUCK YOU STEVE AND EVIE JUST FUCK YOU STEVE BURN IN HELL :(

ugh I would not forgive her if I was Anna. -_- no real life character would logically forgive her that easily its just not realistic.

OH MY GOD HER MOMS THERE OMG

oh my god. (I know all my reviews start like that) but still! :D Evie better apologize though!

oh my god! also love how you introduced that she saw him with Evie in this chapter :) what's gonna happen? D:

oh my I loved the cake scene! lol :) and aw pour Two-Bits... and Kathy. I'm confused because part of me is annoyed that she always cries when in always happens. and she shouldn't of slept with anyone especially Anna's brother- even if Two-Bits did but I still feel a bit bad lol